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9/10/20, 1:17 PM
> ...the power of the Great One seems to be able to make Murdock orgasm and more. > I really want to emphasize the "and more" part of your statement. The next time we see Murdock (chapter 13, I think), we'll see just how much more.
nycboot
9/10/20, 12:43 PM
Totally agree with El Mexicano 4091. And I can tell you're aware of repeating yourself @absman420 so you never give us as detailed view of the transformation as in the earliest chapters (actually I think your description of Mike Milano's transformation in the stand-alone version is almost better than any of those in the series). I love how the power of the Great One seems to be able to make Murdock orgasm and more. Can't wait to read more (and j/o more!). :)
9/10/20, 9:12 AM
I've been working on it every chance I got and the first chapter should be up soon as long as September doesn't become concentrated 2020 like August did. I had so many people who needed my help and so much that needed to be done that I could only get the time to work on this infrequently. Thanks for the offer but the editing is the thing that has been giving me the least problems. The biggest bottleneck has been my decision to divide up the first day into multiple chapters. Some scenes are easy to place but I keep changing my mind on which others should be placed where in between them. The first day is going to be 3 to 5 chapters depending on exactly which order I end up deciding on. My brain also gave me an idea for the pandemic challenge so I will need to devote more time to it this month due to the deadline. I will be publishing the first (and maybe second) chapter(s) before I switch over to it though. Can't work on a new challenge while this unholy monster still haunts my nightmares after all.
9/10/20, 3:26 AM
Loved the concept and world you built. Looking forward to seeing this developed as intended. Any update on the progress of making this into chapters? Willing to help edit if needed.
9/9/20, 10:24 PM
awwww you make them so cute, your cocks! :-)
9/9/20, 9:31 PM
> Stunning. Simply stunning work… read the whole thing today… fantastic > That's called "binge-reading" -- sucking the whole season down when it drops. That's why I'm putting out BOOK TWO one chapter at a time. But seriously, I'm glad you're liking it. Believe me, there's so much more cumming....
9/9/20, 9:18 PM
Stunning. Simply stunning work... read the whole thing today... fantastic.
9/9/20, 8:47 PM
> Argh, this slow drip is driving me insane! Patience is a virtue, I guess… Please, keep it coming! > I will, though once we get to the new stuff in BOOK TWO, I'll slow down to one chapter a week. > Side note: one of the hottest/most interesting features of the Pollination world is the transformation process > Agreed, though I think we only see it two or three times (completely) within these pages. As a writer, there's nothing I hate worse than "Chapter 3: the same thing happens to a third guy" -- so I work very hard to keep it original, including ways to make you, the reader, imagine it.
9/9/20, 8:17 PM
This is a really great story! I mainly enjoyed your sense of humour and I really like how you thought the whole concept into every detail. The story itself is really cute as well - you convey skillfully how much they love each other. And then they had sex! ;-)
9/9/20, 8:15 PM
Argh, this slow drip is driving me insane! Patience is a virtue, I guess... Please, keep it coming! Side note: one of the hottest/most interesting features of the Pollination world is the transformation process, beginning with the man finding a flower and ending with him accepting his Symbiont. I think it's one of the best parts of the story, watching a man go from initially surprised at/nervous about what's happening to enjoying the rush/growth and transformation into a muscled hulk to feeling compelled to accept his Symbiont. I've always wondered what it would look like from the perspective of the man who's experiencing it, his internal monologue, etc. Maybe that's a question for a different story, though!