Recent Comments

Daniel
8/6/18, 12:00 AM
Nice job- wish I could've met a 'Xander' in high school I. J. S.
Anonymous
4/19/18, 4:30 PM
Please write more
2/9/18, 12:55 AM
Thanks very much, Mdlftr. Maybe Martin will have to add an icon/rating for tears? :)
Mdlftr
2/8/18, 4:11 PM
I just reread chapters 7-8 -9 and cried all over again. They are happy tears and ones of tribute to a well-written, emotionally complex, compelling, positive story. Thank you!
9/29/17, 11:41 PM
Bluemohawk: Thanks so much for your comments. It's nice to know this story has touched so many people.
Bluemohawk
9/29/17, 11:18 PM
When I read exceptional stories like this, I feel like I am witnessing a great talent unfold. I am 55 and related to so much in this story. This is easily one of my favorites online or in print. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with the world, and keep writing!
Jun 25, 2017
screamingmoist
8/27/17, 5:06 PM
@bateriam glad you enjoyed it!
Jun 25, 2017
bateriam
8/25/17, 10:46 PM
Man! Read it in two sittings - one dressed and hard . . . and now naked and bating. Just gotta say, "Thanks!"
Apr 4, 2017
bateriam
8/13/17, 7:18 PM
Man! Great transformation draw out. Had me good and hard reading it! Thanks for the effort writing it . . . though I'm sure you were also nicely stimulated while doing so!
Jun 25, 2017
Anonymous
6/30/17, 11:56 PM
Absolutely rad to see a TF story as well done as this with a nice stout short bear sub as the end point. Don't see enough of those so it's damn nice to read.