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9/15/20, 12:36 AM
> Pup Scout is ready for his variant... > Your stream of consciousness was excellent! Good writing -- you win. You'll see the Scenter do his thing next chapter!
9/14/20, 11:59 PM
Hmmm, Pup Scout is ready for his variant. We are thinking Scenter or Implanter. PupScout would make a good Scenter. He appreciates the scent of another man, always keeping enough on himself and searching for it on the men he finds attractive. He knows the seductive power of man scent and with that variant, he would use it well to get men to obey him in service to the Great One. But an Implanter. Oh how he loves the stories of mind control and slavery. Forcing a symbiont on a man as he fucks him into everlasting slavery, would be a powerful weapon PupScout would know how to use wisely and well. But my instinct says that PupScout would long to be the one fucked by the Implanter becoming fused with a symbiont and a slave to his Master Implanter forever. So Scenter it is. PupScout will scent other men. They will discover the scent of other men. He will seduce and control with his scent.
9/13/20, 2:51 PM
Sorry, that's just smart, economical plotting. It's not really Dickensian until you introduce some long-lost relatives or an inheritance plot.
9/13/20, 11:33 AM
> I’ll call you the Dickens of gay porn. > I thought the coincidence of Tully hitting Snake's bike in Quebec would qualify as Dickensian.
9/13/20, 11:04 AM
I think you're more the Tolstoy of gay porn. Although if, say, Snake turns out to be Tully's long-lost father, I'll call you the Dickens of gay porn.
9/13/20, 10:44 AM
> I’ve always been a fan of this and can’t wait to see where it goes! > Me, too! It took me four chapters to cycle through all the subplots and reintroduce the cast. Whatever else this behemoth has, it's got a lot of characters. I feel a little like the Dostoyevski of gay porn. In this case, I know where I want to end up, but haven't worked out all the details yet of how I'm going to get there. As I did the first time I worked on this series, I'm letting the characters tell me what's next. So far, that seems to be working. Thank you for hanging in -- we'll see what happens together!
9/13/20, 10:18 AM
> The diversion from the narrative was fantastic. I smiled all the way through it thinking, “I want to be able to write like this one day.” > This Narrative Diversion (and the one in Chapter 9) is my Tom Robbins influence. Clearly I was reading something of his at the time to so clearly emulate his voice. I've always admired the way he plays with words and constructs his ideas. To me, the narrative break underscores how lost I was as an author -- how I felt I was losing control. I tried very hard to get rid of these breaks (here and next chapter) and I successfully edited them down, but couldn't rid myself of them completely -- there is vital information contained in both. I just feel they disrupt the flow. Glad you like it! > Now to jerk off to this and in the spirit of the story, I’m using coconut oil. > Hahaha! Well done!
9/13/20, 1:32 AM
I've waited so long for this series to be continued, i can wait for more. I've always been a fan of this and can't wait to see where it goes!
9/13/20, 1:05 AM
Damn, I loved that! From beginning to end. The diversion from the narrative was fantastic. I smiled all the way through it thinking, "I want to be able to write like this one day." And another evolution about to take place. Hot hot hot...a 5 starrer in all categories! Now to jerk off to this and in the spirit of the story, I'm using coconut oil.
9/12/20, 2:17 PM
> Tully’d better be careful! > Now, THAT I agree with.