Recent Comments

Matt
9/1/18, 1:40 PM
More!!! Oh dear god more of that!! Love to see Finn come back sheepishly wanting to feel what he felt here!! Damn, well done!!
Apr 4, 2017
Daniel
8/27/18, 1:25 PM
Very detailed, well written, solid characters, brave, romantic....hot! The way it wrapped up got me a bit emotional, great job dude ! I. J. S.
Daniel
8/6/18, 12:00 AM
Nice job- wish I could've met a 'Xander' in high school I. J. S.
Anonymous
4/19/18, 4:30 PM
Please write more
2/9/18, 12:55 AM
Thanks very much, Mdlftr. Maybe Martin will have to add an icon/rating for tears? :)
Mdlftr
2/8/18, 4:11 PM
I just reread chapters 7-8 -9 and cried all over again. They are happy tears and ones of tribute to a well-written, emotionally complex, compelling, positive story. Thank you!
9/29/17, 11:41 PM
Bluemohawk: Thanks so much for your comments. It's nice to know this story has touched so many people.
Bluemohawk
9/29/17, 11:18 PM
When I read exceptional stories like this, I feel like I am witnessing a great talent unfold. I am 55 and related to so much in this story. This is easily one of my favorites online or in print. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with the world, and keep writing!
Jun 25, 2017
screamingmoist
8/27/17, 5:06 PM
@bateriam glad you enjoyed it!
Jun 25, 2017
bateriam
8/25/17, 10:46 PM
Man! Read it in two sittings - one dressed and hard . . . and now naked and bating. Just gotta say, "Thanks!"