Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
9/1/18, 3:53 PM
AMAZING! This story was phenomenal in every way: a kind, thoughtful protagonist, a wish that didn’t immediately ruin people’s lives (clever and sweet!), an achingly hot muscle worship bit, and a sex scene so amazingly hot, so perfectly written, that I felt like I was right there (I almost always skip the sex scenes, but this was PERFECTION). Amazing job!
Anonymous
9/1/18, 3:53 PM
Oh this is good!
Danny
9/1/18, 2:57 PM
I love that, whether he knows it or not, Jack's wish has made having sex with him more addictive than any drug ever could be...
9/1/18, 1:46 PM
Loved it! I hope there is more!
9/1/18, 1:44 PM
Wow. That was really hot! Smart, kind wish, followed by smoking hot sex. Are you planning a second wish story?
Matt
9/1/18, 1:40 PM
More!!! Oh dear god more of that!! Love to see Finn come back sheepishly wanting to feel what he felt here!! Damn, well done!!
Apr 4, 2017
Daniel
8/27/18, 1:25 PM
Very detailed, well written, solid characters, brave, romantic....hot! The way it wrapped up got me a bit emotional, great job dude ! I. J. S.
Daniel
8/6/18, 12:00 AM
Nice job- wish I could've met a 'Xander' in high school I. J. S.
Anonymous
4/19/18, 4:30 PM
Please write more
2/9/18, 12:55 AM
Thanks very much, Mdlftr. Maybe Martin will have to add an icon/rating for tears? :)