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9/19/20, 6:20 PM
> Loving the feel of the Sheriff and his deputy > The Sheriff's Deputy snuck onto the scene because I liked the idea of the Sheriff having a human "familiar" -- a concept I borrowed from vampire lore -- and he developed quickly into an important addition to the Sheriff's "supporting cast". I think they have the healthiest dom/sub relationship I've ever written -- I'll be exploring that a little more closely in upcoming chapters -- and I'll be testing some boundaries. This morning I went on a bike ride with a friend of mine and he reminded me that the Sheriff's Deputy is his favorite character (precisely BECAUSE he's a "familiar"). I assured him -- as I assure all of you reading now -- that I, too, love the Sheriff's Deputy and what I have in mind for him will completely justify his inclusion in this story. (Even if he began as a throw-away character.) All will become clear in Chapter 14. > And Vance, and the idea of him, are so hot! > The idea for the three Variants: Vance, Vinnie, and Vernon, (or the concept of them, at least) came while I was writing [PLAYING WITH Absman420's TOYS: A "Pollination" Tale](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/608546) when I realized half the fun of botany was creating grafts and cuts and combinations of plants that never existed. It was a short step from there to someone genetically altering the alien plants to enhance particular qualities of the variant Host. I didn't use that concept then in that story, but it stayed in my mind until this, when I gave the skills to Mr. Mac. You'll meet Vinnie next and see him in action in Chapter 13. > Looking forward to the next entry. > Next chapter features the return of another fan favorite: Staff-Sergeant Wendt!
9/19/20, 4:11 PM
Another great chapter. Loving the feel of the Sheriff and his deputy. And Vance, and the idea of him, are so hot! Looking forward to the next entry.
9/19/20, 10:58 AM
*je ne parle pas français* There. I've said it. I don't speak French. Many years ago, I was in Montreal on a job and I was worried that I wouldn't be able to talk to anyone. Of course, the group I was working with were all bilingual and more than happy to teach me some French. I learned: 1. I do not speak French 2. Can you tell me where the washroom is? 3. Forgive my manners, I'm an American. 4. Do you want fries with that? This chapter convinced me that Rugby Boy should only speak French and it could be kind of fun. Thank you, Google Translate. WHICH MEANS my French might sometimes be wrong, sorry. I have learned the French word for "penis" tho. Who says you get too old to learn...?
9/18/20, 1:53 PM
Great story.. Impressive for first attempt. Look forward to chapter 2
9/18/20, 1:22 PM
Ooof, air travel is a no go :x RIP
9/18/20, 12:35 PM
*Incroyable*! Great scenes, especially the middle one in the Indy car dealership. I already can't wait for next week's installment.
9/18/20, 12:16 PM
Looking forward to what happens next!
9/18/20, 9:38 AM
very fun start. excited to see where it leads
9/18/20, 9:10 AM
quite a good story. can't wait for the next chapter
9/15/20, 12:36 AM
> Pup Scout is ready for his variant... > Your stream of consciousness was excellent! Good writing -- you win. You'll see the Scenter do his thing next chapter!