Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/2/18, 8:43 AM
Thought at first that this was basically going to be "Consent" the fable jammed with pc (I know this is always important in sex but it just doesn't harmonise well with a story involving mind control for obvious reasons). But you are such a fantastic writer that it works well and you are left with a story that does not simply fulfils your kinks but also leaves you cute and warm inside. Quite a rare and amazing story and kudos or achieving it.
Anonymous
9/2/18, 4:07 AM
Man, I usually like kinkier shit but this was just such an interesting mix of very sweet and very hot. I really... don't want Jack to get fucked over by Rada, even though I usually like my "wishes you end up regretting" stories. It's good to have some happy, sweet, positive ones in there too.
Anonymous
9/2/18, 1:52 AM
This one story as raised my expectations for this entire site. Please continue this story
Anonymous
9/1/18, 8:03 PM
Very hot. Please continue. Let Jack outwit Rada and let them enslave each other.
diddle kid, protector of diddleville
9/1/18, 8:00 PM
I usually don't like friendly consensual sex stories but this was awesome. You did so well that I was actually hoping it would stay friendly and consensual, which never happens for me. Bravo
Anonymous
9/1/18, 6:17 PM
Above the author says that chapter 4 hasn’t been released yet. Does that mean one was written?
9/1/18, 4:20 PM
Thank you guys. I'm happy the things I was trying to express came through clearly. I don't have a sequel immediately planned but I do have some thoughts for a future continuation. I've been letting this story cook for quite a while and I reached the point where I had to set it down and make some decisions before I could figure out where else it might go.
LongtimeFan
9/1/18, 3:53 PM
AMAZING! This story was phenomenal in every way: a kind, thoughtful protagonist, a wish that didn’t immediately ruin people’s lives (clever and sweet!), an achingly hot muscle worship bit, and a sex scene so amazingly hot, so perfectly written, that I felt like I was right there (I almost always skip the sex scenes, but this was PERFECTION). Amazing job!
Anonymous
9/1/18, 3:53 PM
Oh this is good!
Danny
9/1/18, 2:57 PM
I love that, whether he knows it or not, Jack's wish has made having sex with him more addictive than any drug ever could be...