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9/20/20, 11:53 PM
The fact that Sheriff Lane is able to resist the siren call of the great symbiont only makes him hotter to me! He's so powerful on his own. I wonder if that will lead to an inter-pollinated conflict down the road.
9/20/20, 11:23 PM
I didn't even catch that was a Scenter in section 44. And well done too. My bad. Minus 3 points Slytherin.
9/20/20, 7:37 PM
thanks for all the comments xx. next chapter is uploaded sorry editor haha bad timing.
9/20/20, 11:58 AM
> What’s with the transfer of knowledge through the finger? We know of no such power in human, symbiont or fused. > Here's what we DO know: when a symbiont and a human have "normal" sex and the symbiont cums in the human, it creates a bond between the two. With time and repetition, the bond strengthens and the symbiont is able to communicate commands telepathically to the human. Whether the human "hears" the words of the command or is just compelled to obey them isn't yet clear. We've seen this demonstrated in Book One between the Sheriff and his Deputy several times and we'll see some further evidence of it between Snake and Rugby Boy in upcoming chapters. We are just now discovering the depth to which this connection exists. The "implanting of knowledge/future orders" is an extension of this ability -- at least, to my thinking. As for the finger-thing, guess which (often-high) author saw *E.T. the Extra-Terrestrial* that weekend? ("I'll be right here.") Have faith, Pup, it'll pay off in Chapter 14. > And a promise broken. Was I not promised a Scenter scene? > Perhaps you should read section 44 again. If that was too subtle, maybe you'll like Vinnie's power demonstration in Chapter 13 better?
9/20/20, 3:04 AM
Nice, keep the feet, love it <3
9/20/20, 12:35 AM
Not to rain on the parade after such good comments, but the clouds are heavy and the pressure is low. What's with the transfer of knowledge through the finger? We know of no such power in human, symbiont or fused. Explique s'il vous plait. And a promise broken. Qu'est ce que le fuck? Was I not promised a Scenter scene? Or am I being a rudely impatient pup who needs a slap on the nose and told to sit and wait.
editor
9/19/20, 9:33 PM
Great story, please keep writing. Also...if you need an editor ask me to email you. I can help with spelling and such.
Anonymous
9/19/20, 6:53 PM
I love camping story.
9/19/20, 6:20 PM
> Loving the feel of the Sheriff and his deputy > The Sheriff's Deputy snuck onto the scene because I liked the idea of the Sheriff having a human "familiar" -- a concept I borrowed from vampire lore -- and he developed quickly into an important addition to the Sheriff's "supporting cast". I think they have the healthiest dom/sub relationship I've ever written -- I'll be exploring that a little more closely in upcoming chapters -- and I'll be testing some boundaries. This morning I went on a bike ride with a friend of mine and he reminded me that the Sheriff's Deputy is his favorite character (precisely BECAUSE he's a "familiar"). I assured him -- as I assure all of you reading now -- that I, too, love the Sheriff's Deputy and what I have in mind for him will completely justify his inclusion in this story. (Even if he began as a throw-away character.) All will become clear in Chapter 14. > And Vance, and the idea of him, are so hot! > The idea for the three Variants: Vance, Vinnie, and Vernon, (or the concept of them, at least) came while I was writing [PLAYING WITH Absman420's TOYS: A "Pollination" Tale](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/608546) when I realized half the fun of botany was creating grafts and cuts and combinations of plants that never existed. It was a short step from there to someone genetically altering the alien plants to enhance particular qualities of the variant Host. I didn't use that concept then in that story, but it stayed in my mind until this, when I gave the skills to Mr. Mac. You'll meet Vinnie next and see him in action in Chapter 13. > Looking forward to the next entry. > Next chapter features the return of another fan favorite: Staff-Sergeant Wendt!
9/19/20, 4:11 PM
Another great chapter. Loving the feel of the Sheriff and his deputy. And Vance, and the idea of him, are so hot! Looking forward to the next entry.