Recent Comments

12/26/25, 2:51 AM
I really(!) hope there’s another chapter here. This story has been so hot and yet heart wrenching. It’s interesting the System brought Five to Souta intentionally, but surely that means the System has a plan for how to reunite the two?

12/26/25, 10:38 PM
@[rodjock](/user/show/227582) Further chapters are already in the making/ready for release! :)
12/26/25, 8:21 PM
Really great story and hot as hell. I’m really loving this one. Great job
12/26/25, 7:21 PM
I don't read Spanish, but deepL translator works great. Hot story. I'm looking forward to seeing what Principal Brown has planned for the big hunky coach? :muscle:
12/26/25, 4:35 PM
This story is so hot and so well-written. Love the worldbuilding and MC’s POV, too. Top’s POV, horny muscle bottom daddies - push all my buttons why don’t ya, lol And then you add in different types of powers, too. Can’t wait to see where your dirty, creative mind takes things!
12/25/25, 2:36 PM
Amazing story, amazing writing. Took me a while to discover this, but oh my, have I been missing out! Very unique and extremely hot!

12/26/25, 1:58 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) So glad you liked it! Xxx
Anonymous
12/24/25, 2:43 PM
You are really an incredible writer

12/26/25, 1:21 AM
@Anonymous Awww, you’re too kind!
12/24/25, 9:05 AM
Merry christmas indeed. I love these characters and i love your writing style. Excited to see where we go from here.

12/26/25, 12:53 AM
@[Lazyboyxn](/user/show/908476) Hey! You were my first ever comment! I’m so glad to hear you’re still enjoying the story and these two lovely fellas. Hope you’ll enjoy what’s coming next as well :kissing_heart:
12/24/25, 7:53 AM
Another AMAZING chapter! I absolutely love both characters and I think every gay boy (myself included) needs a Chris in their life.

12/26/25, 12:51 AM
@[PSExplorer](/user/show/10064257) Oh that we should all be so lucky to have a Chris of our own. Maybe some lucky guy will get one for CHRIS*tmas? :smile: Thanks for reading as always xx
12/25/25, 11:53 PM
Would love a new chapter of this someday!
12/24/25, 10:19 AM
Yeah, I definitely came to this chapter. Holy fuck! I'm definitely going to need another 100 chapters or so.

12/25/25, 11:02 PM
@[Jack Reader](/user/show/915335) Fuck yeah, where at? The hottest moment for me writing was def when Chase was trying to get off River’s dick.