Recent Comments

9/19/18, 6:24 PM
Can't wait for the next part... but I will happily.
9/19/18, 1:24 PM
Just a reminder that every bottle of Mariposa causes a different change. Just because the first two bottles made the guys bigger doesn't mean the rest will. Who knows what's next? (Pssst: I do.)
Thegreatstoryteller
9/19/18, 12:16 PM
cant wait to see what chico is going to do! hope he becomes the biggest guy there!
Anonymous
9/18/18, 10:14 PM
Very hot, hope to see "Chuck" make Jesus and Chico try a couple bottles next chapter ;)
nycboot
9/18/18, 7:40 PM
Wow, what writing! I have to say I have much more interest in Pierce than in the two protagonists, but I'm looking forward to see what happens. :) Great start!
Derek Williams
9/18/18, 4:46 PM
LOVED Pierce's speech in chapter one. Good to see Chuck and Derek getting into it. I feel like Chuck is going to loosen up way more before this vacation is over!
Anonymous
9/18/18, 11:51 AM
I love Cris' stories! I hope they follow the directions properly. I'm betting Pierce will have is way with the two. Hahaha...
Stormbound
9/16/18, 6:18 PM
Hot! Can't wait to find out what the rest of the bottles do. And I hope the boys follow the directions, though I suspect an accident may happen
LongtimeFan
9/16/18, 6:06 PM
Yay, Cris is back! I love your work, and this story is already shaping up amazingly. Can't wait to see what happens!