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9/26/20, 11:22 PM
Not related to this story (although superb as always) In anticipation of reading these story parts this evening, I was jerking off this morning thinking of a wrestling team getting their symbiotes. Erotic imagination took its powerful course and before I knew it all the men on the team and opposing team had been turned into plants...and I shot a good load at that thought. While licking my fingers and hand clean of cum, I started to chuckle thinking, "damn that absman. I'm now finding men turned to plants exciting!!"
9/25/20, 9:30 PM
> Finally, the army guys are back and Devin is so in their sights. I could see him like the deputy is with the sheriff; that might be the best option. > It might be. It all comes down to available time. When I looked at the overview, chapters 10-14 all take place over the course of one day. (You will see it gets later and later in that day as the chapters move along.) Chap 15-16 are the next full day, 17 is the day after that, and 18 is a (time) transitional chapter (but within a few days) and I wrap up Book Two in 19. With the amount I need the Super Soldiers to do -- and the limited time I have for them to do it in -- I don't know when they'd have time to transform Devin. But as I said before, I've come to like Devin, so I don't want to shit on him...
9/25/20, 8:45 PM
I'm excited to read more of this! Your stories are very well-written. Can I ask if you have any inspirations for the stories you've written?
9/25/20, 8:08 PM
Finally, the army guys are back and Devin is so in their sights. I could see him like the deputy is with the sheriff; that might be the best option. But I'm looking forward to see where you're going with this ride. Definitely looking forward to seeing how the army guys get out and who they convert along the way.
9/25/20, 7:14 PM
I've wondered if Travis is oblivious to how Andy is benefiting from Travis's subliminal messages. Another hot chapter!
9/25/20, 2:56 PM
> I think Part 49 would have been hotter if it was told from the perspective of the waiter, and we only got overheard snippets of the Lenoldis’ conversation. > Valid point-- and I agree. I have discovered that POLLINATION works best when told from the victim's POV. At the time I initially plotted this scene, my intent was that it be from the waiter's perspective. But to be honest, I've been enjoying the Lenoldi's relationship and I thought the insight into the Father's motivation/ philosophy was important for plot developments later. It was all too subtle to be captured by the waiter overhearing stuff. Next chapter, you'll meet the hapless Willis, and I think that will get us all back on track with the way this narrative works most successfully. > The part with Devin especially. > There are certain new characters that I'm really enjoying: Rugby Boy, Vance, Willis (for comedy relief), and poor Devin. The fact is I haven't figured out the end of Devin's story -- I have two options for him, one good and one expected. The "good" ending will inconvenience the plot -- the "expected" ending (the ending I initially plotted) will disappoint Devin fans. (And I admit, I'm a Devin fan. I've really come to enjoy working with the character, so I'd like to keep him around. You know, expand the cast a little further.)
9/25/20, 2:32 PM
Loving this! The part with Devin especially. I'd love to get more parts from the perspective of the still-transforming men; for instance, I think Part 49 would have been hotter if it was told from the perspective of the waiter, and we only got overheard snippets of the Lenoldis' conversation.
9/25/20, 7:32 AM
I wonder what is Travis's goal for Ian and if Andy isn't in the way. The cooking Ian made for Travis is making my mind go wild over the possibilities...
9/25/20, 5:41 AM
I'm loving it! Cant wait to see whats next!!
9/24/20, 5:36 PM
Looking forward to the next chapter, in which Ian ... ... ends it with his girlfriend ... takes up smoking ... gets his head shaved ... moves in with Master Andy ... realizes he no longer needs/wants his "white noise" ... embraces his identity and destiny