Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/23/18, 6:56 PM
Very well written, funny and interesting! Great premise=magic drinks on your honeymoon!
9/23/18, 4:19 PM
A cliff hanger worthy of Victor Hugo! You've got such a vivid imagination! This is turning out to be a wonderful story - I'm not sure any sexual activity can counteract the narrative. Great going, and looking forward to more!
Thegreatstoryteller
9/23/18, 3:37 PM
ah! Always leaving us on a cliff hanger! brilliant job with this story though. love where its going
Anonymous
9/21/18, 12:44 AM
I love this, cannot wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
9/20/18, 1:46 AM
So glad you rebooted this series, its still my favorite. Keep it up!
9/19/18, 6:24 PM
Can't wait for the next part... but I will happily.
9/19/18, 1:24 PM
Just a reminder that every bottle of Mariposa causes a different change. Just because the first two bottles made the guys bigger doesn't mean the rest will. Who knows what's next? (Pssst: I do.)
Thegreatstoryteller
9/19/18, 12:16 PM
cant wait to see what chico is going to do! hope he becomes the biggest guy there!
Anonymous
9/18/18, 10:14 PM
Very hot, hope to see "Chuck" make Jesus and Chico try a couple bottles next chapter ;)
nycboot
9/18/18, 7:40 PM
Wow, what writing! I have to say I have much more interest in Pierce than in the two protagonists, but I'm looking forward to see what happens. :) Great start!