Recent Comments

nolanspice@gmail.com
9/25/18, 6:41 PM
I can't find Chapters 1 & 2...
9/24/18, 6:46 AM
Amazing work! I can't wait to see them change again!
9/24/18, 4:08 AM
AUTHOR'S NOTE: for everyone's enjoyment, please try not to post spoilers in the comments after each chapter. Hope you find the story to be a fun ride. Thanks!
Derek Williams
9/24/18, 1:16 AM
Nice, didn't figure we'd get another chapter with that tf - cool! Sent you an email tho, cuz I got a guess about spoilers.
Anonymous
9/24/18, 12:14 AM
very good plot, but cannot wait to see what the next chapter has to offer for the next tf
9/23/18, 8:06 PM
I appreciate the nice feedback. If I could ask a favor, please try not to post comments or speculation that might be regarded as spoilers, at least until the whole story has been posted. Thanks! CK
Anonymous
9/23/18, 6:56 PM
Very well written, funny and interesting! Great premise=magic drinks on your honeymoon!
9/23/18, 4:19 PM
A cliff hanger worthy of Victor Hugo! You've got such a vivid imagination! This is turning out to be a wonderful story - I'm not sure any sexual activity can counteract the narrative. Great going, and looking forward to more!
Thegreatstoryteller
9/23/18, 3:37 PM
ah! Always leaving us on a cliff hanger! brilliant job with this story though. love where its going
Anonymous
9/21/18, 12:44 AM
I love this, cannot wait for the next chapter