Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/12/18, 1:30 PM
I'd love to see a mariposa story where one of the bottles turns the guy into someone with a phimosis foreskinned cock, a tight foreskin suddenly that they have to learn to navigate! Or conversely, an uncut guy becoming cut and needing to figure out the new sensations!
Thegreatstoryteller
10/12/18, 12:55 PM
i love how charlie is finding a sense of belonging! also i love the hamilton and dear evan hansen references :D hope todd can get his hands on some mariposa!
LongtimeFan
10/12/18, 11:55 AM
Another amazing installment! You have such a gift for characterization--I absolutely love Todd and Beau, because they feel like whole people. Your descriptive language, too, makes me see and even feel every scene. Thank you for such an incredible story! :)
Anonymous
10/7/18, 8:54 PM
I love the subtle humor in the writing: “You SURE things are totally okay between you and your ‘buddy’?” Derek shrugged off the damaged wall. “What, that? No, that’s…that’s nothing. He’s a…totally different person today.”
TheGreatStoryTeller
10/5/18, 6:47 AM
I have a feeling Pierce has been keeping an eye on these two for a while now ;) Also, I wish Chico got to have the drink he was looking for! I have high hopes for him
bikerbro
10/5/18, 3:53 AM
Holy shit, this is easily one of the hottest stories I've read on here, and that's no mere feat! Easy-going surfer dudes, red-headed fratbros, and rage-riddled punks, all with natural chemistry and a unique concept. Much love for this story, man.
Anonymous
10/5/18, 12:59 AM
Great changes and good cliff hanger at the end! Party on, dudes!
Anonymous
10/5/18, 12:43 AM
Great humor and great writing! I'm enjoying this honeymoon!
Anonymous
10/4/18, 9:19 PM
Excellent Great Thanks
Anonymous
10/4/18, 6:43 PM
Love the personality changes!