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10/4/20, 1:30 PM
My favorite story so far.
Oct 2, 2020
10/4/20, 5:16 AM
Such a hot and well-written story!
10/4/20, 3:16 AM
Great concluding chapter to this hot story! Thanks for the explanation of Travis's motivation and the connection between Travis and Andy.
10/3/20, 11:41 PM
okay. comments ahem. to be fair continuity is what you make of it but we don't know what happened to the initial wave of men Smitty and Mike and I think well it's the comic that has submitting deciding to leave the town not necessarily the original story so so it's entirely possible in addition to other meteors that there are rogue assets going around doing as they will. or not all pollination needs to be direct from host still still give something for our Scully to do somehow missing a ridiculously odd migration pattern all to one defunct farm overall overall this has been a solid experience
Oct 2, 2020
Anonymous
10/3/20, 5:55 PM
There are writers on this blog who are English-speaking who cannot write as well as you. You did a good job. The two or three boo-boos were more syntax and conversational than hard-core grammar. Loved it!!
10/3/20, 2:51 PM
Absman....I live in central NH. So many Canadian truck drivers at rest areas. Come on up and we'll get busy. And bring some plants.
10/3/20, 1:50 PM
@darmani posted this comment over in the POLLINATION Discussion Thread on the Forum -- I thought it worth sharing here, too: > So sad about the plane crash > Nice fucking in the woods. Hmm there are flowers unaccounted for…eh? > Feel sorry for the convenience store clerk, especially when the footage gets pulled. > The plane crash was inevitable, but that article will come into play later. The flowers in the woods scene was really fun to write! Originally, I was going to cut the scene as the pollen launched at Rugby Boy, letting Snake save him in the next scene, but I decided I needed to speed things up with these two and get them to WV faster, so I compressed it into one long scene. I like it better this way. The presence of other flowers was the detail I wanted to emerge from this segment, so I'm glad you noticed it. Willis' story at the WaWa isn't over! Come back next chapter for part 2!
10/3/20, 12:46 PM
> Rugby boy. So hot that he doesn’t have a name. > I wasted the better part of a writing day way back in Chapter 10 trying to figure out a good name for Rugby Boy. Imagine me with my "French Names" google search putting together every variation of Jean-Luc and Jean-Paul there could possibly be. (I even looked through the athletic roster of the Quebec Rugby Union to see if I "saw" Rugby Boy.) Eventually, I just gave up on it and figured if I needed it, I would create it. Turns out, it's been a really fun ride with this character. My favorite moment comes next chapter when Rugby Boy is introduced to Sheriff Lane. > I want to be Rugby boy. > I confess a certain weakness for French-Canadian men, that dark-haired, creamy skin thing just kills me. I find them sexy as all get-out. I was in Montreal a few years ago at an outdoor coffee shop just drooling over the men as they made cigarette smoking sexy. Despite his name, Rugby Boy is a big man, for whom submission has long been a fantasy. I dig Rugby Boy, too.
10/3/20, 7:43 AM
We'll get there. . . eventually.
10/3/20, 7:42 AM
well I can't wait to see where this goes