Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/13/18, 6:05 PM
A dumb punk AND a dumb jock, both excellently written? Great and hot stuff, super excited to see where this is going!
bikerbro
10/13/18, 4:17 AM
I don't think I've read a hotter punk transformation than what Derek's going through - the dumbing down, loss of vocabulary, the accent, attitude, aesthetic...God, it's perfect. You got a gift, man.
10/12/18, 11:38 PM
Cris, you are doing an excellent job with the vivid characters, realistic dialogue and funny, often awkward and relatable situations. I can't wait to see where this story goes!
Anonymous
10/12/18, 9:35 PM
This story is making me really sad but also hot at the same time... it's conflicting. I hope things do end up working out for Chuck and Derek.
10/12/18, 3:55 PM
Wow this is moving toward an interesting conclusion. Please continue.
Anonymous
10/12/18, 3:34 PM
Slipping further into the headspace of a dumb punk...love it!
Anonymous
10/12/18, 1:30 PM
I'd love to see a mariposa story where one of the bottles turns the guy into someone with a phimosis foreskinned cock, a tight foreskin suddenly that they have to learn to navigate! Or conversely, an uncut guy becoming cut and needing to figure out the new sensations!
Thegreatstoryteller
10/12/18, 12:55 PM
i love how charlie is finding a sense of belonging! also i love the hamilton and dear evan hansen references :D hope todd can get his hands on some mariposa!
LongtimeFan
10/12/18, 11:55 AM
Another amazing installment! You have such a gift for characterization--I absolutely love Todd and Beau, because they feel like whole people. Your descriptive language, too, makes me see and even feel every scene. Thank you for such an incredible story! :)
Anonymous
10/7/18, 8:54 PM
I love the subtle humor in the writing: “You SURE things are totally okay between you and your ‘buddy’?” Derek shrugged off the damaged wall. “What, that? No, that’s…that’s nothing. He’s a…totally different person today.”