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10/18/18, 12:16 AM
Thanks for sharing that Daniel.  I'm glad the story connected with you! 🐻  Got more biker Bear stuff on my blog. 🐻
Daniel
10/17/18, 10:19 PM
Never would have thought a narrative that opened so dangerous, would turn out to be sweet enough to bring a tear to my eye...I dated a biker on the DL in the early 80S, One of the most challenging, rewarding relationships I' ve ever had....sometimes the flame can be too hot....I.J.S.
Mikelg
10/16/18, 10:37 AM
it's a lovely story, thanks :)
nycboot
10/15/18, 1:50 PM
I'm so into this story a tear actually welled up in my eye when I read the portion where Charlie asks Todd the probing question. Maybe Charles can give Todd (I liked the name Iowa more :) ) a half-bottle of the Mariposa? :)
Anonymous
10/13/18, 6:05 PM
A dumb punk AND a dumb jock, both excellently written? Great and hot stuff, super excited to see where this is going!
bikerbro
10/13/18, 4:17 AM
I don't think I've read a hotter punk transformation than what Derek's going through - the dumbing down, loss of vocabulary, the accent, attitude, aesthetic...God, it's perfect. You got a gift, man.
10/12/18, 11:38 PM
Cris, you are doing an excellent job with the vivid characters, realistic dialogue and funny, often awkward and relatable situations. I can't wait to see where this story goes!
Anonymous
10/12/18, 9:35 PM
This story is making me really sad but also hot at the same time... it's conflicting. I hope things do end up working out for Chuck and Derek.
10/12/18, 3:55 PM
Wow this is moving toward an interesting conclusion. Please continue.
Anonymous
10/12/18, 3:34 PM
Slipping further into the headspace of a dumb punk...love it!