Recent Comments

10/22/18, 10:26 PM
My motto as a writer: No Character Left Behind. I knew this was going to be a heavy exposition chapter -- it's basically a two-man one-act play -- but this seemed like a logical place to break it before the action of Day 3 really kicks in.
nycboot
10/22/18, 8:56 PM
...and please don't forget Todd. :)
nycboot
10/22/18, 6:37 PM
I love this story! This is kind of the "explanation" portion, but Pierce is such an amazing creation. He's endlessly fascinating - I just love reading about him. I look forward to the end of this story, but I strongly encourage you to keep Pierce in your arsenal in case he has other friends he wants to treat in a royal way.
10/20/18, 11:57 PM
I totally agree with "LongtimeFan." I love this series, but after this installment, my empathy totally went away with the hedonistic newlyweds and landed with poor Todd. He was dropped so suddenly that I hope that he's picked up again. Maybe he ends up with Pierce and the latter brings him out of his shell.
LongtimeFan
10/20/18, 5:48 PM
P.S. Out of everyone, I feel the worst for Todd...I hope he gets a happy conclusion in the story!
LongtimeFan
10/20/18, 5:46 PM
Ha ha, I knew it! I guessed that Pierce was using Mariposa to keep an eye on his friends. But I only figured it out because of your amazing writing, Cris, and how you scattered clues throughout the story. Fantastic stuff! Thank you for always producing such incredible stories. :)
Anonymous
10/20/18, 4:11 PM
whyyyy didn't Charles and Chico have sex, such a missed opportunity to drive the plot forward and include some real sex
Anonymous
10/20/18, 3:51 PM
beau w pierce? wow haha
Anonymous
10/20/18, 3:43 PM
This such a great series. I don't know many authors on this site that evoke such emotions; hating Pierce and Chico, and empath for Derek and Charles still trying maintain their monogamy even with their changes. My only problem is I feel blue balled from waiting for the next update. Please keep it up!
Anonymous
10/20/18, 9:53 AM
Plot Twists? In my local gayspiralstory? It's more likely than you think