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10/17/20, 9:24 PM
> Definitely want to see what type of great one the Deputy will become. Felt a bit sad reading that exchange between him and the Sheriff before the transformation began. > > Excited for the deputies transformation. > The Sheriff seems pretty confident that he can control the Deputy -- but what's that saying? "Power tends to corrupt. But absolute power corrupts absolutely." Yeah, that's the one.... > Absman is keeping me hard all day long just with the thought in the back of my mind. > Success! To me, this is the difference between erotica and a jack-off story. Erotica stays with you, infiltrates your thoughts, corrupts your fantasies. Not that there aren't whack-off moments within the erotic novel, but I think it's the stuff that stays with you that matters more.
10/17/20, 7:34 PM
Excited for the deputies transformation. The load in his ass from earlier in the morning should be doing it's job. Hope the sheriff keeps his tank full while the great flower does it's work. Absman is keeping me hard all day long just with the thought in the back of my mind.
10/17/20, 6:04 PM
At first read, I thought the Staff Sergeant was teasing Devin but you do say he's faking it. So there's still hope Devin will be a familiar to them. Definitely want to see what type of great one the Deputy will become. Felt a bit sad reading that exchange between him and the Sheriff before the transformation began.
10/17/20, 10:20 AM
> love this story. but would love to read longer chapters at once. > That's the one thing I'm trying to be consistent about between Book One and Book Two: chapter length. John Byrne said it should take as much time to read a comic book as the average crap lasts. I believe that's true of serialized erotica, too. Just long enough to wank.... I love that you're a real reader, but I don't want length to intimidate.... so instead, bite-sized chunks that frequently change POV to maintain interest from the short-attention scan crowd. It might be best for you to wait and read it all at once when it's all published. > maybe a twist that those units drone “break free” and assimilate their creators ? > Something remarkably similar happens in chap 18 which I hope will satisfy this stray thought.
10/17/20, 8:09 AM
love this story. but would love to read longer chapters at once. and maybe there is a detailed description of creating the drone units from the original storys and maybe a twist that those units drone "breake free" and assimilate their creators ? (just wishful thinking) ;)))
10/16/20, 6:24 PM
It should go without saying, but I'll say it anyway: you should tell the story you want to tell, rather than catering to the idiosyncratic tastes of your various readers. I'm just sharing my honest feedback, because I feel like there's nothing worse than a story you worked hard on getting almost no feedback.
10/16/20, 6:02 PM
Book One -- Aliens invade and transform men into unlikely and unsuspecting soldiers Book Two -- Aliens come together and prepare to battle for the domination of the planet Book Three -- The Conflict and ultimate resolution between humans and aliens That's always been the rough outline.
10/16/20, 5:53 PM
> In the “first season,” there was a big emphasis on straight-to-gay transformation, and those transformation scenes were some of my favorite parts. The “second season” spends more time following characters who are already gay, which doesn’t personally push my arousal buttons in the same way. > I'm sorry it's not the experience you'd like to have, but I couldn't write another 90 thousand words on "and then the same thing happens to Bob." Characters have to have a purpose beyond transforming and turning gay. Otherwise it's "A Thousand Characters in Search of a Plot." The show-runner is different -- I'M different! It's fifteen years later. I'm older, wiser, a better storyteller. Even if I were to follow the same format as Book One, at some point, there would HAVE to be conflict that can't be overcome with "hey, someone left you a flower!" Why write it if it's the same thing over and over again? The Good News is Book One will always be there for you. SPOILERS: Book Three is a gritty, post-apocalyptic boy meets car story.
10/16/20, 5:34 PM
Finally, everyone's made it to Bowden Farm! Love the image of 200 kneeling men simultaneously ejaculating into the dirt. ' I'm still struck by the ways this "second season" of Pollination: The Series is very different from the first. (If I didn't know better, I'd say it had changed showrunners). In the "first season," there was a big emphasis on straight-to-gay transformation, and those transformation scenes were some of my favorite parts. The "second season" spends more time following characters who are already gay, which doesn't personally push my arousal buttons in the same way. Still, I look forward to reading a new chapter of this story every Friday!
10/16/20, 3:38 PM
Ok now we're cooking!