Recent Comments

10/23/20, 12:49 PM
Right now, I'm reading the upcoming "war" between the two symbiote factions as a metaphor for how two of your main strengths as a writer--coming up with distinctive characters and devising plots that revolve around depersonalization/dehumanization--are going to war in this story. Right now, your love for your characters seems to be winning, which I can relate to as a writer. As a reader, though, I keep hoping that we'll get more scenes of depersonalization and dehumanization, from the perspective of the symbiote-controlled humans (and not just from the viewpoint of outside observers).
10/22/20, 5:12 AM
This is a delight! I’m very excited to see where it goes!
Grey
10/21/20, 10:27 PM
hot as hell dude, please continue!
10/21/20, 1:53 PM
Great start! I look forward to seeing where this goes, and what the limits of the book are. As for cleaning up more, and wearing less, I know I'd love a maid in his underwear and an apron dusting in some hard-to-reach corners. So good job!
10/21/20, 10:41 AM
i love it!! cant wait for more!! was hayden aware he fucked himself for 12 hrs? can we see his reaction?
Evan
10/21/20, 7:47 AM
Very imaginative use of the book. Thanks for writing. Hope to see more experimentation.
10/21/20, 3:18 AM
Excited for more.
10/20/20, 9:45 PM
Please keep going! Off to a really great start.
Anonymous
10/20/20, 2:47 PM
Amazing start to the story! Looking forward to more
10/20/20, 2:47 PM
I really liked the pace of the story. I got to know the characters well enough. Please continue