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10/30/20, 3:36 PM
I LOVED Chapter 66! The "HAIL GREAT ONE" scene is the kind of thing I've been hoping to see for weeks, and you didn't disappoint!
10/30/20, 3:29 PM
Okay, now we're cooking with gas! The enslavement was sexy and sinister, just the way I like it. It's a stroke of luck- pun intended- that Joe had to tap out so early. It seems that one's enthrallment to the Great One is proportionate to how much damage his healing repaired. I was expecting Joe to have to watch Tony and all the other men turn into blank-faced drones, but it seems like the Great One is interested in a little bit more foreplay now than he was than when he erased Murdock. I do confess to feeling bad for Mr. Mac, his boys no longer have any feelings for him. But I'm sure we'll be seeing a confrontation between Joe, Lane, Snake, Deputy, Rugby Boy, and the Variants in 18 or 19- can't wait to see how that one pans out! I'm curious to see if the Lt. plans to simply turn Devin into his familiar like Lane and Snake did with the Deputy and Rugby Boy, or if he's going to reward him with a plant of his own. And I'm still waiting for the Chekov's Gun that is those unaccounted-for plants Snake and Rugby Boy found to go off...
10/26/20, 8:06 PM
There should totally be more to this story, it's hot.
10/25/20, 7:45 AM
you better keep writing, you have a real gift, i cant wait to see where your mind goes next
10/24/20, 4:55 PM
wow, you really write well and pace the story and the delivery of the facts beautifully. one of the best written and conceptualized stories I've read anywhere. i found myself wanting to be Slave Ian throughout the storyline. and you really turned me on mentally and physically, my dick was throbbing and i couldnt leave it alone while i was reading! i hope you plan on writing a lot more, i did read your other story listed here too, also very good.. you may be my new favorite!
10/24/20, 12:16 PM
> I hope Tully makes it out OK–I know she’s a relatively small character, but I’ve felt for her since the very beginning (plus I do like Gillian Anderson!). > I like Gillian Anderson, too -- I even like Tully, although Tully reminds me a little of Lois Lane sometimes. Like, c'mon Lois, you never noticed the glasses and the slouched posture and the vocal timbre and the big muscles under that cheap suit...???? I like smart characters -- and I hated that Tully couldn't figure it all out faster. I think she would've if not for the needs of the plot. Still, for obvious reasons, you'll see she continues to cling to the idea of "saving" the human host, even though as a forensic scientist, she knows that may not be possible. Now, a little extra truth-telling, since we're discussing Tully: a little upthread I spoke of one of the driving images of this series, the seeding of the farm, but there are several others -- all of which I'll talk about after Book Two has been completely released. One of these includes Tully -- and to be honest, it's the reason I've kept her around.
10/24/20, 11:34 AM
What a great chapter. I hope Tully makes it out OK--I know she's a relatively small character, but I've felt for her since the very beginning (plus I do like Gillian Anderson!). As others have said, you've also done a great job pivoting from eroticism to horror--we get so caught up in the fantasy of becoming a hugely muscled giant that we forget that these are alien creatures threatening to subsume the identities of every man on Earth in the name of "repopulation." And now all of the sudden, we're reminded of that through the assembly line-like seeding and the devoured Deputy. Fantastic stuff! :)
10/24/20, 11:17 AM
> I didn’t like the feminization of the soldiers: “honey,” throwing a kiss, sashay. > That's just Dobie -- he's an asshole. Can I argue that I don't see it as feminization, I see it as playful? As a musical-theatre snob (nerd), I imagine them as being the chorus boys (seabies) in SOUTH PACIFIC, friendly banter that's harmless, but supportive of the main scene. I just wanted a bit of "color commentary" in the midst of some really banal exposition.
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10/24/20, 3:27 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!!
10/24/20, 1:38 AM
>the comments are really a big spoiler in kind of way > I promise I haven't given any spoilers -- I've merely given us some things to think about...