Recent Comments

Ken
7/7/19, 6:19 AM
LOVE how the underdog, Ramses, overpowered his brother Seth. Can't wait for more.
Anonymous
7/7/19, 4:41 AM
Glad to see you continue the story! Looking forward to future installments!
Anonymous
7/6/19, 6:21 PM
love the twists! great job please continue!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
7/6/19, 5:37 PM
I also hope this continues
Anonymous
7/6/19, 5:20 PM
brilliant. really enjoyed this. hope you continue it.
Anonymous
7/6/19, 3:11 PM
Awesome story I need more !!!
Robert
5/1/19, 2:09 AM
Beautifully written story... loved the characters, the set up and the resolution. Bravo.
Mreyes
4/25/19, 3:47 PM
awesome story!!!! I hope there is a second part
Anonymous
4/24/19, 1:30 PM
This was hot! I hope it continues.
Martin
4/20/19, 6:26 PM
> horrible hopefully you do not write anymore, in this time it is a true disgust to speak of ancient Egyptians and everything related to pyramids. The pyramids really are disgusting, a real shit. I hate the pyramids. This must be the weirdest comment on this site ever. Especially the rant about Native Americans being the best. If you really think that: Having a history of being discriminated (as the Native Americans have) does in no way justify to discriminate other peoples. And that's exactly what you're doing. Please keep your hate away from this site. It's not welcome! And your comment against the author and his story is even less welcome. You may criticize, but without any personal insult and not just based on your own prejudices.