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Apr 4, 2017
turbo2600
12/20/19, 8:39 PM
Man, what a great story. I wish this would happen to me! Maybe in a way it is... I like how he was traumatized at first with the thinning hair, then accepted it. It's happening to me. I get turned on at the thought of going bald now. i just gotta pack on the pounds and have the fur grow in elsewhere!
Anonymous
12/9/19, 6:51 PM
Story arc looks like Topher is moving in with the Daddies. That's where you can have Topher narrate what's happening to him. It'll be hot, for sure. Blonde, shaved and boyish, while clearly being an adult.
Anonymous
12/9/19, 6:41 PM
Hot story!! Predictable, but hot!!
boi98229
12/8/19, 11:36 PM
Not sure how it might work, but as bak2jak suggested, hearing a little from Chris's point of view might be really hot. You could use an expression of this thoughts to highlight his confusion, and his mental transition from skater boy to gay houseboy and hypnoslave. Chris is experiencing a change of mental focus from downtrodden teen skater boy to a prized and loved gay submissive whose new focus is worshiping his new Daddies, relying on their guidance, and slavish obedience to their commands and needs. That process, which you have already established is incredibly hot for me. I fantasize about experiencing this myself, so elaborate on the process, including Chris's murky thoughts and feelings, so this story which is already enthralling might get even hotter. Thanks so much. Looking forward to more - in whatever way you see fit to extend the story. ~david
Anonymous
12/8/19, 3:10 AM
great job
Anonymous
12/7/19, 3:48 AM
this was super hot, i cant wait for him to be topped by both of those daddies like a good boy
Anonymous
12/6/19, 5:51 PM
This is so sexy! It got real dramatic there at the end. . . But so sexy! ! !
Ruanraykung@me.com
12/6/19, 3:30 PM
Really hot. I loved to be good boy for those 2 Daddies
boi98229
12/5/19, 7:42 AM
i am a sucker (literally and figuratively) for man scent, mind control, hypnosis, slow entrancing seductions, Dominance/submission, and alt/emo boy style. So as you might guess, i found your story enthralling, and like Chris i am ready for he next chapter.
Anonymous
12/4/19, 4:03 PM
One of the hottest newest stories hope to see more! Love to see Chris become a loving daddys boy.