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11/16/20, 9:39 PM
Yeah, I see three possibilities: (1) French has formal and informal 'you', which is weird to an anglo so Absman420 didn't differentiate. (2) He's deliberately showing that Snake has meh French. (3) Rugby Boy is somehow in power over Snake, but Absman420 is letting us know that.
11/16/20, 9:20 PM
I'm willing to bet it's a mixture of Google Translate, and Absman wanting Snake to speak non-fluent French that *translates* properly, but may not be grammatically correct Snake seems the kind of guy who may not know (or care) about the grammar rules of a Romance language, especially if the only guy he's speaking it to is a hot rugby player head-over-heels for him.
11/15/20, 10:20 PM
> If this is the way the world ends, I’ll line up at the nearest greenhouse. > Lust + Muscle Growth = Easy End of the World. Anyone out there listening? > Loved the editorial voice being so self-aware. > That was clearly a Tom Robbins influence on me -- and I cleaned it up SIGNIFICANTLY from its original form to here. To me, it reads like "author runs out of ideas and admits it" -- haha. I bring the editorial voice back at the end of BOOK TWO so I can pretend I'm artsy, where I'm a lot harder on myself as a writer. Really Derek -- glad you're reading this!
11/15/20, 6:02 PM
Binged the hell out of the original story and book one after reading the forum thread. If this is the way the world ends, I'll line up at the nearest greenhouse. Loved the editorial voice being so self-aware. Looking forward to book two!
11/15/20, 1:04 AM
> Pup, TRUST ME when I say, on this note, Rugby Boy gets the last laugh. I just smiled like the freaking Grinch, Absman. Looking forward to Chapter 20.
11/15/20, 12:39 AM
> I love how as English speakers, be it UK, Ireland, US, Canada, Australia, NZ, and so on, we all share the derogatory remark of “Frenchie” towards the French speakers. > Pup, TRUST ME when I say, on this note, Rugby Boy gets the last laugh. Trivia: my high school nickname was "Frenchie" True -- 40 years ago now, no revivals, thanks
11/15/20, 12:04 AM
PupScout, you have far more discipline than I do if you can wait over 24 hours to read new Pollination chapters!
11/15/20, 12:00 AM
A Saturday night, a packed bowl, full balls and a Pollination story. Comme c'est parfait. The only thing I lack is a hot mug full of fresh cum to slurp down after reading Devin's description of the Lieutenant's spooge. On a different note, "Don't fight me Frenchie." I love how as English speakers, be it UK, Ireland, US, Canada, Australia, NZ, and so on, we all share the derogatory remark of "Frenchie" towards the French speakers. It's funny and I'm glad it escaped from the dictates of our overly sensitive society. It gave me a good chuckle.
11/14/20, 1:31 AM
Whoops, I must've read the last line wrong, I thought Devin entered with Rugby Boy. So he's going to show up at the station part-way through Chapter 20. I wonder what he's going to walk in on. Also, I'm *very* curious to see what had Snake so distracted that he didn't rush to save Rugby Boy...
11/14/20, 1:26 AM
> Devin was able to keep up with the Super Soldiers and run all the way to the police station. > You're a little ahead. They left him behind, but told him where to go and to follow. He's trailing them by about a half hour.