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11/17/20, 7:17 PM
> put Everybody’s Favorite Character in jeopardy and watch people freak the fuck out! And then there's freaks like me who were reaching for the lube...
11/17/20, 7:16 PM
> Cruel Author Fun: put Everybody’s Favorite Character in jeopardy and watch people freak the fuck out! Don't worry. While I wait for Friday, I'm mulling over what I could write to torture you the most.
11/17/20, 7:13 PM
> Okay, after the last chapter I was pissed at you about Rugby Boy, but good feint. > Cruel Author Fun: put Everybody's Favorite Character in jeopardy and watch people freak the fuck out!
11/17/20, 6:08 PM
While RB getting zonked by Vernon's cum would've been hot as fuck, I definitely agree that probably would've been a waste of RB as a character. But maybe the Deputy could've transfered RB's devotion from Vernon back to Snake if Snake protested. Regardless, I'm waiting to see how exactly RB is going to "come out on top" over Vernon.
11/17/20, 6:02 PM
Okay, after the last chapter I was pissed at you about Rugby Boy, but good feint.
11/17/20, 2:10 PM
Hi Kyle, good news I am actively working on this series. I have lightly revised the first three parts but I didn't want to post them until the remaining chapters are ready to go. It is my plan to finish all the parts so I can make sure they're consistent and satisfying. Chapter 4 needs a little bit of revision and it will be ready to go. Chapter 5 needs an extensive rewrite. Chapter 6 should end the story.
11/17/20, 12:04 AM
> And another superhero reference. > Hahaha -- have we met?
11/16/20, 11:30 PM
My palms were seriously sweaty for Devin when he was being carried up the stairs spiderman style. And another superhero reference.
11/16/20, 11:07 PM
I'm liking that the elder Lenoldi is just starting to understand that he's not the one in control here. Arrogance is one hell of a drug. Reminds me of the porn studio owner in "Erotically Enhanced Executives" from my Vanilla series - the guy who thinks he's in control right up until the moment he realizes he'll never be in control again. Laughed out loud at Tully trying to remember how to record her call. I've done that one myself. Yeah... I'm definitely in love with Rugby Boy. Please don't hurt him. You can hurt Sheriff Lane.
11/16/20, 10:36 PM
> I feel bad for the Sheriff and Snake. Knowing that they can’t become Great Ones, given that they’re already carrying a lesser symbiote - it might be enough to drive a man mad. > More for the Sheriff than Snake, for sure! But I think the Sheriff likes being Svengali -- not the King, but the guy with the King's ear. He can cause a lot of damage as Prime Minister and if people kill the King, well... he can always make another. > I think I’m in love with Rugby Boy. The scene in the diner got me. > Someone's got to be the ingenue in a horror movie.