Recent Comments

nycboot
4/6/20, 11:27 PM
Like John, once you get over the shock of the thing happening, you go with the flow. A very nice story. I hope there is a continuation. No mind control that I see, but...who knows....
4/6/20, 8:42 AM
Bravo!! I've read this twice now and have been moved to joyful tears each time. Masterfully done!
nycboot
4/1/20, 2:18 AM
Nothing to do with mind control but a real well-crafted idea for a story! One really empathizes with the plan and protagonist! Thank you!
Drake Nightstrom
3/31/20, 10:21 PM
I love the brilliance of this piece. 1. The plant is reborn aka reincarnation happens in a very beautiful and real way. 2. I love the struggle to not create another plant lover that will just die on the main character, that also felt real. 3. I love how the love the two had overcame death. That death was real for them both in different ways but utilimitly didn't win over lover. Over all this was just a fantastic read.
3/30/20, 6:50 PM
Well Done mate. I won't spoil it by saying what I hope happens in further chapters!!!
3/30/20, 2:53 AM
This was... lovely. I can't find the words, but I really, *really* enjoyed it.
3/30/20, 1:55 AM
Thank you Captain, that truly means a lot. And yeah. Grab a carrot; they stay firm longer. (Robin told me)
Martin
3/29/20, 8:21 PM
I have no idea how one can write a text that makes the reader start to get feelings for a plant and feel sad because of its end. This has to be one of the most amazing and outlandish stories I've ever read. I do know that you have a very special fantasy (you know why I know that...), but this is mind blowing. ...maybe I should get myself a cucumber. And have some fun with it. You never know what might happen :)
3/28/20, 5:30 PM
Like the rest of the comments here already, I too LOVE THIS! The characters are kind and writing is EXCELLENT! The protagonist made KINDNESS, in the form of being a refuge for someone else, take PRECEDENCE over sex and sexuality. THAT is a concept that's RARE here. This leaves me wanting MORE. And to me THAT is ALWAYS a good sign of GREAT writing. MORE PLEASE.
3/28/20, 4:30 PM
Hy guys really feelin' the love. I really am a 'concept' writer and it took a lot for me to publish this story. I was expecting it to be received badly. @drakkonflye; I'll continue slowly bleeding them up once I re-edit them to fit GSS's formatting a little better (and catch all those blasted spelling errors!). If I have the ability, I may even rewrite the magician's parties completely, as a sort of "best of" series of characters from other stories (so the likes of John and Abe are present in the background, PizzaDaddy, Freddy-bear etc) same story, just with up to date cameos.