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11/28/20, 2:53 AM
absman, I adore your writing, I really do. Your sense of the dramaturgical is exquisite, your feel of tempo and rythm impeccable, your stories are orgasm-inducingly tense and exciting. Thank you for writing stuff, dude. And thank you for that short pruning at the start of this chapter.
11/28/20, 12:40 AM
> Je t’adore, mon Rugby Boy. Adieu. > Fear not, Gil's story is far from over! Trust me, I have a great idea for him in Book Three -- I planted the seed in the very speech you quoted...
11/28/20, 12:05 AM
I want to cry. I loved everything. Rugby boy saying "“I would’ve followed you anyway, because we were friends, because we’d both loved and submitted to powerful men. We’d had that in common, so we could support each other now. But you’ve barely gotten your power and already you abuse it. Mon ami, you disappoint me.” I now know why I love him so. He understands brotherhood and the hierarchy of men. Je t'adore, mon Rugby Boy. Adieu.
11/27/20, 5:57 PM
> Loved the music / warfare comparison. > Thank you. I just felt that scene needed underscoring. If it had been a movie, the orchestra would've been going wild and then cut off on Tully's reveal -- I was trying to catch that flavor on the page.
11/27/20, 5:46 PM
That was really fun. Loved the music / warfare comparison. Gave a laugh at Flower Oath. But now I'm wondering, since the flowers are repopulating, where are they repopulating from, and are their gardeners on the way.
11/27/20, 4:16 PM
Loved your discussion of the garden and the aggressive nature of plants. I appreciate the sense of humor you display throughout your writing. Wonderful work on this exciting second book of your series. I hope that you will be inspired at some point to continue the saga and write book 3.
11/27/20, 3:45 PM
I think they'll call him "Gil" (btw -- my Baby Name book has "Gilen" (hard "G" -- gill-uhn, not like "Gillian" with a soft "G") meaning "Vow" or "Oath", but I like yours better.
11/27/20, 3:34 PM
Bravo! HAIL ABSMAN! Gilen Lafleur. The last name was obvious- the flower- but I had to dig for Gilen. Eventually, I tracked down that it is a Basque variant of Ghislain, which means betrothed or hostage So Rugby Boy is literally a flower hostage. You sly fox, you.
11/27/20, 3:07 PM
Check out the Author's Notes and discussion on the [FORUM](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/pollination-the-discussion/1810/678)
Apr 4, 2017
11/26/20, 3:23 PM
Amazing!