Recent Comments

7/6/20, 6:06 PM
Really cool world and story you cane up with, and great character motivations. It all came through very clearly. Great job!
Martin
7/6/20, 5:07 PM
I agree with the previous commenters. What a beautifully crafted and written story. Even the sex scene, as short it is, is written beautifully and full of romance and love. I really enjoyed reading your story and thank you so much for sharing it with us!
Pup Rex
7/6/20, 6:54 AM
love it!
Martin
7/1/20, 2:49 PM
Great written story. Not really my thing as a kink, but the twist at the end was really nice and hot, too. Spiders already wrote everything there's to say from an intellectual pov, better than I ever could!
7/1/20, 2:18 AM
Truly, unexpectedly beautiful writing. A little masterpiece.
6/30/20, 12:09 AM
I kinda love the super natural elements peppered throughout. would love to see how things happen next!
Eric Roesch
6/25/20, 10:24 PM
The story is great, and I really enjoyed the characterization.
Doug
6/25/20, 10:13 AM
I agree with Oxstorm
6/24/20, 9:43 PM
That was awesome I hope it continues
6/19/20, 3:28 AM
This is simply a masterful exercise of craft. It was a full narrative, with a great structure, elegantly done. The characters felt distinct and driven by complex emotions. And it was deeply romantic in ways that weren't conventional or cliched. It's just a very cool and confident bit of writing. The world building was handled well too - it didn't feel awkward or exposition heavy and the writing didn't feel mannered or archaic despite managing to feel immersed in its setting. I massively enjoyed it, basically. Thanks for writing it and I hope you write a lot more stuff in as many different genres as possible. It was so cool to see a well-written and multi dimensional female character too. i guess for obvious reasons to do with the focus of the site any women often get a bit sidelined. I really appreciated how much more expansive and textured the story felt for including her and giving her a perspective.