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12/24/20, 10:47 PM
Another sweet Xmas mind-control love story. Awesome!
12/24/20, 10:29 PM
Thats sweet!
Anonymous
12/15/20, 3:05 PM
Your story is great. I love you know how the story will progress.
12/13/20, 5:16 AM
Ohhh, @martin ! Thank you for such lovely words. You have really brightened my day! I especially appreciate a comment on this part, since I think it originally got fewer views than the others due to some technical issues with the predecessor sites. Also the comments that I've seen have been that people think part 3 is generally the hottest part of the series so far, so I am very gratified you are impressed with the intensity of the sexual exploration in this part!
Martin
12/12/20, 11:16 PM
This is so intense! That fucking scene must be one of the hottest and intense I've ever read. How could I have missed this story for so long?!
Evan
12/11/20, 9:20 AM
Re-reading this was fantastic. I am very excited there are new chapters coming. Great writing and great premise. Thanks for re-visiting this and continuing.
11/29/20, 10:57 PM
Great story, very hot please don't stop! I really hope Ian will hypnotize Jay to slowly push Collin into his arms. Keep up the great work.
11/29/20, 11:03 AM
> You, and all your stuff, played a huge role in my literary-sexual awakening. > This made my whole day. Thank you.
11/29/20, 1:01 AM
> Wow – thank you! That sentence felt very much like one of mine – balanced phrases, percussive consonants, strong adjectives – well done! I am not surprised. I've been reading your stuff since I was 15, 12 years ago. You, and all your stuff, played a huge role in my literary-sexual awakening. Thank you for writing ♡
11/28/20, 1:08 PM
> I really like the author asides when they appear–you manage to strike a perfect balance between winking/nudging (which gets really old after a while) and speaking frankly to the reader without totally removing them from the world of the story. > I love Tom Robbins -- and I will take any chance I can to plug him! If you have not read him, immediately stop reading this and order one of his books on Amazon (or whatever service you use). May I recommend "SKINNY LEGS AND ALL" -- my first exposure to him -- his famous "EVEN COWGIRLS GET THE BLUES" or his beautiful "JITTERBUG PERFUME" where we learn the secret of immortality is sex and beets. Funny, insightful, his love of language and playful narratives will make you love words to the point where reading and dancing are the same thing. My narrative asides are all me channeling Tom Robbins. > West Virginia crew fleeing the scene and heading to parts unknown. Do I sense a European adventure coming? > Think a little more tropically. In the FORUM, we've been discussing symbionts and cold weather/ winter/ darkness and whether those would be weaknesses for them. I say, let's go south! > I love how the story serves a small reminder of what I think is one of your major themes–the notion that power almost always corrupts. (THEY)... keep desiring more, more, MORE despite having amazing bodies and perfect health. Nothing is ever enough, especially the feeling of being worshipped. In the old stories, gods needed praise and worship like a drug–it kept them alive and powerful. > This is so well stated, I just wanted to draw attention to it again and thank you for the observation.