Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/15/20, 2:03 PM
Really needs editing as sentences run on or stop abruptly with periods, commas and semi-colons mixed up. First paragraph makes no sense... There might be a great story in there but my brain hurt trying to get through the first lines and gave up.
7/13/20, 11:40 AM
Your back!!! And I'm super interested in what is happening! Honestly, I'm okay with you taking your time, even if I do admit a year is a bit long... Actually, I'm more interested in the four other brothers than the dad! I wonder what they act like.
Anonymous
7/13/20, 12:19 AM
Great story, so hot. Love everything about this! I hope Ram gets to enslave his dad. Turn him into a muscle daddy slave. The power trips are especially doing it for me. Bravo!
7/12/20, 10:14 PM
U are right, I had forgotten about this, but man how glad I’m it is back! This one was amazing, hope u choose to continue this story. Hope irl stuff get solved for u, best wishes!
7/12/20, 9:39 PM
Yay, its back! I hope in the end, if you continue this, even his dad comes to serve him <3
7/12/20, 2:53 PM
I really hope the "king" gets what is coming to him, make him a slutty power bottom
7/6/20, 6:06 PM
Really cool world and story you cane up with, and great character motivations. It all came through very clearly. Great job!
Martin
7/6/20, 5:07 PM
I agree with the previous commenters. What a beautifully crafted and written story. Even the sex scene, as short it is, is written beautifully and full of romance and love. I really enjoyed reading your story and thank you so much for sharing it with us!
Pup Rex
7/6/20, 6:54 AM
love it!
Martin
7/1/20, 2:49 PM
Great written story. Not really my thing as a kink, but the twist at the end was really nice and hot, too. Spiders already wrote everything there's to say from an intellectual pov, better than I ever could!