Recent Comments

8/3/20, 7:30 AM
I agree with the crowd, this has a lot of potential. And like potato chips, even if it is similar to other werewolf stories (though none on this site that I can think of), there's always an appetite for more.
Anonymous
8/3/20, 7:19 AM
I hope the sarge can turn into a werewolf too
8/2/20, 8:31 PM
Thanks for the quick note on the formatting guys! I don't know why the copy-paste from my source cocked that one up. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I'm gonna try to write a good story for each of the War Dogs and a few more besides. And trust me, the sexy stuff is coming soon!
Nutiper
8/2/20, 8:12 PM
*Damn* what a start! From the first few paragraphs, I found myself anticipating (and hoping for) a delicious, gradual development of this promising dynamic between Yates and the werewolf regiment -- and boy, did this chapter deliver! Sets up a lot of hot tension; some *great* worldbuilding going on in the background; and five distinct characters who play off each other really well. And then, that surprise at the end, with Aed's hypnotic voice, making anything he says become the new reality for Yates: whew!! I liked how clearly reluctant Aed was to have to use this power on Yates, but also, how much it affected Yates... Dreaming about it afterward... even thinking of himself as "Roman" for a moment because that's how Aed described him... I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story!
8/2/20, 7:30 PM
Awesome first chapter! I look forward to reading more. Dace, you're one of my favorite authors on this site.
8/2/20, 5:40 PM
l really hope you continue this story. it has a great start.
8/2/20, 1:57 PM
I liked the original story and this shows great promise. More please!
Evan
8/2/20, 9:43 AM
Pity about the formatting glitch. Sorry you have to fix it up but I am looking forward to reading it when it's sorted out. The tags and concept sound really interesting.
8/2/20, 8:38 AM
Hummm.... Dace, You forgot to put paragraph in the text... It's readable, but could you please edit the story to add some space?
Johnthedoe
7/31/20, 5:35 AM
Yeah the original version was much less cramped but my brain added so many interconnected plot lines that trying to fit it in the word count allowance of the challenge scrambled everything. It's taking me quite some time to weave them all back together but I will make it happen.