Recent Comments

Bbeef
8/9/20, 7:39 PM
really a cool one!
8/9/20, 6:07 PM
This has a wonderful potential for a series. I think the grammar and spelling distracted me severely so I would encourage you to ask Martin or one of the more prolific authors to review and correct BUT NOT CHANGE the story. It must be yours and what a wonderful idea this is. Very original and sympathetic. The more potential and twists I see , the more I'm inspired to read. Very original and enjoyable!!
8/9/20, 2:28 PM
Fascinating developments. Please continue!
8/9/20, 2:15 PM
too many long sentences and paragraphs, it's hard for me to read. A shame, since based on the tags I would've loved this story
8/7/20, 11:32 PM
Arroooo...I liked that. I hope Yates becomes a werewolf through some thick creamy dog juice jackhammered deep inside him by the husky blonde.
8/4/20, 12:17 PM
I'm glad everyone enjoyed this so much! I have a follow-on series about werewolves of this style joining the military in modern America, called War Dogs. You can find it here on GSS at this link: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/2156142 Enjoy!
8/4/20, 2:56 AM
A great start and a compelling set of characters. This one really stands out. I really look forward to future chapters.
8/3/20, 8:56 PM
Very good story start. Good enough to be a non-porn story, although it veered that way for obvious reasons. Is porn with a plot in our future? :- )
jamiemboy
8/3/20, 12:02 PM
Loved it so far ! :)
8/3/20, 11:28 AM
Well, every time I copy from word, the space between paragraphs disappears. I think it's just markdown who doesn't fully work the same way as other writing softwares