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3/5/25, 2:11 AM
I knew from part one that you are an expert at building up sexual tension and excitement, and part two not only confirmed that, but it proved that you can write the sex just as amazingly as the build up. I adored every word of this, it was so worth the wait. So hot to see Pat accept how raunchy Brian is, and I'm so excited to see where things go from here!

3/5/25, 11:53 AM
@[KBlume](/user/show/10031073) Thank you for your kind words! I wanted to get into the meat of the story, as it were, relatively quickly, but I wanted to build the anticipation- there needed to be some preamble before I got to the sex! Pat's acceptance of Brian's raunchy side is not entirely organic- there's another force at work that is influencing him to embrace it. We'll get into that down the road- have patience!
Anonymous
3/5/25, 11:15 AM
This is equal parts hot and sweet. The ending felt a tad rushed there, but I think it’s just ‘cuz I wanted to see more of these two.
3/5/25, 6:10 AM
Very hot and sweet story. And I'm a Sucker for hairy body worship
Anonymous
3/4/25, 7:10 PM
Sot hot! Please more!!
hornybear
3/4/25, 4:58 AM
This was one of my favorite series and I was gutted because I thought it got abandoned. Really happy to see you’re back and thanks for the wonderful continuation!

3/4/25, 5:54 AM
@[hornybear](/user/show/10039852) Thank you for remembering it all these years. I've been wanting to continue this one for a long time.
3/4/25, 12:26 AM
Great start, and great on its own. I can't wait to see where you take it...
Jul 22, 2023
3/3/25, 8:43 PM
one of the best stories I've read on this site in a long time
Anonymous
3/3/25, 4:38 AM
I enjoyed this a lot! Thanks for posting it here.
3/1/25, 12:44 PM
Can he keep Jules deflated for longer by making him cum before he would reinflate?

3/3/25, 12:11 AM
@[bejjinks](/user/show/10021429) Yes. Deflated-him, basically just wantes to jizz. With careful planning, it looks like he could keep him under for several days (weeks?). There is considerations like his fitness calendar and stuff, but technically he could keep him under for quite a long time (if he so wanted).
3/2/25, 7:43 PM
Cockatrice you're an unbelievable writer, thanks for continuing to share this with all of us.