Recent Comments

Nutiper
8/11/20, 12:43 AM
Oh but I love this *so* much. I really liked this peek into Aed's perspective and personality, and also liked getting more of what the werewolves are up to behind the scenes -- they're written in a way that's very endearing, and their dynamic is super fun to read. I'm also enjoying both the chemistry and the cultural disconnect between Yates/Tim and Aed. You can tell they both like each other, and neither wants to fuck it up, even though they're both coming from very different places, and so are both aware (in their different ways) of the potential to fuck things up through misunderstanding, without even meaning to. It adds this layer to their budding relationship...
8/11/20, 12:22 AM
Thank you for continuing this amazing story; definitely like the attraction that is build between Aed and Yates.
8/10/20, 6:34 AM
A great story that definitely gave me "Star Kid" vibes in the beginning, but the grammar and spelling errors were too persistent to ignore. Your idea and descriptions are all great, but this needs some heavy cleaning up.
Bbeef
8/9/20, 7:39 PM
really a cool one!
8/9/20, 6:07 PM
This has a wonderful potential for a series. I think the grammar and spelling distracted me severely so I would encourage you to ask Martin or one of the more prolific authors to review and correct BUT NOT CHANGE the story. It must be yours and what a wonderful idea this is. Very original and sympathetic. The more potential and twists I see , the more I'm inspired to read. Very original and enjoyable!!
8/9/20, 2:28 PM
Fascinating developments. Please continue!
8/9/20, 2:15 PM
too many long sentences and paragraphs, it's hard for me to read. A shame, since based on the tags I would've loved this story
8/7/20, 11:32 PM
Arroooo...I liked that. I hope Yates becomes a werewolf through some thick creamy dog juice jackhammered deep inside him by the husky blonde.
8/4/20, 12:17 PM
I'm glad everyone enjoyed this so much! I have a follow-on series about werewolves of this style joining the military in modern America, called War Dogs. You can find it here on GSS at this link: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/2156142 Enjoy!
8/4/20, 2:56 AM
A great start and a compelling set of characters. This one really stands out. I really look forward to future chapters.