Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/22/20, 3:45 AM
Hoping for oral in werewolf form.
Anonymous
8/21/20, 10:35 AM
I can't believe I missed this! What an interesting story - I really hope you keep writing!
8/19/20, 7:59 AM
really nice story !! will there be a second chapter ?
8/14/20, 5:47 PM
Sorry but this made no sense.
8/13/20, 8:11 AM
I just re-uploaded an edited copy to address the mighty need of spelling & grammar corrections 😅 I hope this will greatly improve the reading experience.
8/12/20, 8:47 AM
I really like this because it's an alien story. The werewolves look human, but they don't think like humans. They have different morays and folkways, different beliefs and outlooks then any human culture. Those in turn are motivated by their physiology, which doesn't function like humans. They need less sleep, consume more (and probably different kinds) of food, can eat raw meat, run faster and longer than humans and have different needs. Oh, and they don't seem to have women, making them a mono gender society. Add in the wolf spirits that live in their head and influence the way they think, including preventing them from committing sexual assualt and you have a culture completely unlike any human culture. And the army and Yates pretty much treat them as such. definitely looking forward to more.
8/11/20, 8:13 PM
I'm enjoying this story and the developing relationship between Aed and Tim. I look forward to where you take the story next.
Nutiper
8/11/20, 12:43 AM
Oh but I love this *so* much. I really liked this peek into Aed's perspective and personality, and also liked getting more of what the werewolves are up to behind the scenes -- they're written in a way that's very endearing, and their dynamic is super fun to read. I'm also enjoying both the chemistry and the cultural disconnect between Yates/Tim and Aed. You can tell they both like each other, and neither wants to fuck it up, even though they're both coming from very different places, and so are both aware (in their different ways) of the potential to fuck things up through misunderstanding, without even meaning to. It adds this layer to their budding relationship...
8/11/20, 12:22 AM
Thank you for continuing this amazing story; definitely like the attraction that is build between Aed and Yates.
8/10/20, 6:34 AM
A great story that definitely gave me "Star Kid" vibes in the beginning, but the grammar and spelling errors were too persistent to ignore. Your idea and descriptions are all great, but this needs some heavy cleaning up.