Recent Comments

9/21/20, 12:25 PM
I enjoyed chapter 2..looking forward to Collin being in love with Ian and turn against Jay. Would be fun to get Collin to flex in front of Ian just to annoy Jay.. My only negative in the chapters is the guys talking about alphas and betas.. I don't think in the 'real world' you would say it out loud as doesn't feel natural, and as someone else said some tightening up with editing and punctuation. People like this series so I imagine they would be happy to help with editing if you asked. Good work!
9/21/20, 12:05 PM
super hot! I love it!
9/21/20, 11:24 AM
Awesome chapter! I found the projector scene to be very hot. Take your time, and keep up the great work!
9/20/20, 7:37 PM
thanks for all the comments xx. next chapter is uploaded sorry editor haha bad timing.
9/20/20, 3:04 AM
Nice, keep the feet, love it <3
editor
9/19/20, 9:33 PM
Great story, please keep writing. Also...if you need an editor ask me to email you. I can help with spelling and such.
Anonymous
9/19/20, 6:53 PM
I love camping story.
9/18/20, 1:53 PM
Great story.. Impressive for first attempt. Look forward to chapter 2
9/18/20, 12:16 PM
Looking forward to what happens next!
9/18/20, 9:38 AM
very fun start. excited to see where it leads