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9/24/20, 5:59 AM
A good start to an interesting story. One technical note: It's a bit odd the story is written in present tense, considering it's written like a diary which I think is a great way to present the transformation. Since he'd be writing these entries after the fact, I think past tense would fit better.
9/24/20, 1:52 AM
Awesome first chapter! I look forward to what happens next.
9/24/20, 1:27 AM
Your writing is impeccable as always! I'm gonna follow this story now like I do with Casey's Dog Life.
9/24/20, 12:18 AM
wow...thank you. that story is very very hot to me...I enjoyed it thoroughly
9/23/20, 8:01 PM
Super excited to see what develops from here, and thought this chapter was really well-written!
9/23/20, 6:34 PM
Please tell me there's more. I'd love to learn more about the white noise machine, Travis, and see how Andy trains Ian.
9/23/20, 6:31 PM
chapter 2 please. that was a great set up
9/22/20, 2:37 PM
it's a good story.
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9/21/20, 6:19 PM
Great story! For ideas, maybe Jay ends up being an Omega foot slave. :)
9/21/20, 4:49 PM
it is a really great story. can't wait for the next chapter.