Recent Comments

3/6/25, 3:24 AM
I was so happy to see this series updated!! I loved this chapter and I'm really enjoying the fine line being walked between arousal and fear. I second the praise for the dialogue too, it's super well written and the characters feel very rounded and alive! I can't wait to read more!!

3/6/25, 3:43 AM
@[JimsJorts](/user/show/10008527) Thank you! For the dialogue, I try to put myself in each character’s shoes, identify where their thoughts and emotions are at in the moment, and type what comes to mind- I think this method captures the flow of real life conversation well.
3/5/25, 3:45 PM
Nothing easy about writing a sex scene, but you recognized that our emotional investment in the characters makes the sex so much more powerful. Well done, my friend! And compliments to your dialogue -- reads very naturally, just like people talking.

3/5/25, 10:00 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thank you! This is high praise, coming from a man who has written sex scenes that I still revisit to this day, at least a decade on from when he originally discovered them! I want my sex scenes to serve the plot and emotional beats of the story: I still want them to be fun and sexy and for guys to read them one-handed, but the sex should flow naturally from the emotions of a scene. Characters fuck because of something that happened between them, or something happens between them because they fuck. Like how in musicals, characters start singing when the emotions get too big for simple dialogue, but here, instead of breaking out into Sondheim, they reenact Tom of Finland pictures!
3/5/25, 2:11 AM
I knew from part one that you are an expert at building up sexual tension and excitement, and part two not only confirmed that, but it proved that you can write the sex just as amazingly as the build up. I adored every word of this, it was so worth the wait. So hot to see Pat accept how raunchy Brian is, and I'm so excited to see where things go from here!

3/5/25, 11:53 AM
@[KBlume](/user/show/10031073) Thank you for your kind words! I wanted to get into the meat of the story, as it were, relatively quickly, but I wanted to build the anticipation- there needed to be some preamble before I got to the sex! Pat's acceptance of Brian's raunchy side is not entirely organic- there's another force at work that is influencing him to embrace it. We'll get into that down the road- have patience!
Anonymous
3/5/25, 11:15 AM
This is equal parts hot and sweet. The ending felt a tad rushed there, but I think it’s just ‘cuz I wanted to see more of these two.
3/5/25, 6:10 AM
Very hot and sweet story. And I'm a Sucker for hairy body worship
Anonymous
3/4/25, 7:10 PM
Sot hot! Please more!!
hornybear
3/4/25, 4:58 AM
This was one of my favorite series and I was gutted because I thought it got abandoned. Really happy to see you’re back and thanks for the wonderful continuation!

3/4/25, 5:54 AM
@[hornybear](/user/show/10039852) Thank you for remembering it all these years. I've been wanting to continue this one for a long time.
3/4/25, 12:26 AM
Great start, and great on its own. I can't wait to see where you take it...
Jul 22, 2023
3/3/25, 8:43 PM
one of the best stories I've read on this site in a long time