Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/16/21, 7:05 AM
Attacking political parties I thought wasn't allowed. I think people forget how homophobic Democrats are. They only pander to gays when it suits them. Please don't post inflammatory political stuff.

Martin
4/16/21, 8:41 AM
@Anon: Just because the character is described as a "homophobic republican", the story doesn't imply that all republicans would be homophobic or that non-republicans couldn't be homophobic. I don't see the issue here.

Anonymous
4/16/21, 8:48 AM
lmao, trying to police other people's self-expression ain't a good look sis! Whatever happened to free speech? Also, the story didn't mention democrats even once?

4/16/21, 6:46 PM
Both parties are trash but only one actively tries to strip the rights and freedoms of our fellow LGBTQ+. Don't be daft

Anonymous
4/16/21, 7:12 PM
@ I don't see how it's an "attack" when Hicks is a fictional character and appears to be a composite of a number of Republican politicians who've expressed the exact same view points.

4/16/21, 10:10 PM
@ why should it mention another political party? Not everything has to be artificially bipartisan like the evening news. If the plot demands the takedown of a homophobic politician and you want some local realism, there's really only so many options.
4/16/21, 10:09 PM
This was fantastic, well done. Great pacing, good character work, and a hot scene. looking forward to more!
Anonymous
4/16/21, 12:35 PM
I agree that this doesn't seem to attack Republicans. If anything, it's just an overused and unoriginal stereotype of one of the American political parties.
4/16/21, 3:15 AM
Fuck, this is hot. I hoped that the trio of friends would come up again after their introduction in the first chapter and I'm excited to see our accursed bottom's development! Great job, and looking forward to more!
4/15/21, 9:05 AM
Like the other commenter said, an instant classic. Each chapter has been insanely hot & you've done a great job at balancing mind-bendingly erotic sex with plenty of personality in the writing style to make it feel unique and memorable. I know you've gotten feedback for changes in the comments, but honestly I'd say stick to your guns & stay true to your initial vision, what you've done so far has been fantastic & I can't wait to see how it pans out. My only sadness is it will be 10 chapters not 100!
KKA
4/14/21, 8:44 PM
feels like an instant classic, loving your development of these characters. looking forward to more, this curse will be a marathon for Willem AND you!
Anonymous
4/13/21, 8:26 PM
More please more
4/13/21, 4:34 PM
Oh yes, of corse this story brings me so much fun, but the end has break my heard into painful peaces, which i will never found again.
jimbor
4/13/21, 5:37 AM
Awesome story. I would love to see Willem forced to give up expensive preppy straight guy clothes and shoes - and maybe get a suitable haircut! -
Jay
4/13/21, 3:13 AM
Really enjoying this story, it is fantastic. So often erotic stories sacrifice character development for sex scenes but you have masterfully combined both. I'm definitely on board for more of Willem's trials and tribulations. I did think this chapter missed a trick by not having the cop shove that nightstick inside Willem while he was fucking him - I love DP scenes and the one with Josh and the twins was over all too soon for my liking! I don't know if you'd consider a spot of fisting - I can envision a scene where Josh and/or the twins inflict that on Willem. And I would really like to see Willem publicly humiliated - wearing skimpy clothing, coerced into nude modeling or porn if he wants to get the dick that he wants. Desperation for dick could easily be the lever for guys to push him into stuff like that, especially if they know he's homophobic and a bully.