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Dec 24, 2020
12/24/20, 10:29 PM
Thats sweet!
Anonymous
12/15/20, 3:05 PM
Your story is great. I love you know how the story will progress.
12/13/20, 5:16 AM
Ohhh, @martin ! Thank you for such lovely words. You have really brightened my day! I especially appreciate a comment on this part, since I think it originally got fewer views than the others due to some technical issues with the predecessor sites. Also the comments that I've seen have been that people think part 3 is generally the hottest part of the series so far, so I am very gratified you are impressed with the intensity of the sexual exploration in this part!
Martin
12/12/20, 11:16 PM
This is so intense! That fucking scene must be one of the hottest and intense I've ever read. How could I have missed this story for so long?!
Evan
12/11/20, 9:20 AM
Re-reading this was fantastic. I am very excited there are new chapters coming. Great writing and great premise. Thanks for re-visiting this and continuing.
11/29/20, 10:57 PM
Great story, very hot please don't stop! I really hope Ian will hypnotize Jay to slowly push Collin into his arms. Keep up the great work.
Apr 4, 2017
11/26/20, 3:23 PM
Amazing!
11/26/20, 3:14 AM
I was inspired to mock up a billboard for Mariposa on the DeviantArt page where I post my transformation images and photocomics. Thought you might enjoy it: [Drink Mariposa](https://www.deviantart.com/criskane/art/Drink-Mariposa-M2M-Transformation-862279616) Who knows? Maybe this'll inspire me to write another "Six Pack" story?
11/17/20, 2:10 PM
Hi Kyle, good news I am actively working on this series. I have lightly revised the first three parts but I didn't want to post them until the remaining chapters are ready to go. It is my plan to finish all the parts so I can make sure they're consistent and satisfying. Chapter 4 needs a little bit of revision and it will be ready to go. Chapter 5 needs an extensive rewrite. Chapter 6 should end the story.
Anonymous
11/9/20, 8:45 PM
What a very touching and sad story! Thank you for this. I'm not into the spanking either but it worked for the story. Even though Lock accepted that it was good and natural to be an "invert", in an era before the word "homosexuality" was well-known outside medical journals, he probably would have perceived both spanking and anal penetration as different kinds of "perversions", rather than anal being the "default" kind of same-sex intimacy. And I can't help but feel that the ending, swimming into the ocean, is symbolic of how profound Lock and Sawyer's isolation would have been, the two of them against the world, even had Lock joined Sawyer all those years before, and the isolation of gay men in society in general at the time. More bitter than sweet. I feel silly saying it, but I've never teared up at a story on a gay smut website before. Maybe it's just the coronavirus isolation getting to me.