Recent Comments

12/27/25, 2:29 PM
WELL DONE ... and wonderfully written. It is wildly erotic and exciting because I love all the hypnotic phrases and the references to smells. It is so wonderful. I loved it.
J J
12/27/25, 3:38 AM
Intriguing. I can’t decide if this is good enough as a stand-alone or a great first chapter. What happened to Newcomer?

12/27/25, 1:07 PM
@J J I did mean this a stand alone, to the point of deliberately not creating a backstory to the situation. However, as is usual I did think about what happens next (but not enough to even write two paragraphs and stall as I normally do.) The problem is that what I thought of would not have answered your question; although, it may have encouraged more.
12/27/25, 12:18 PM
Oh wow another hot chapter. The whole hypno with his lil bro Blake is so hot. Love that he remembers everything. Im excited whats gonna happen to the family, especially during their "bonding" time. And i cant wait what where would his connection to Derek would go, especially with both of their powers.
12/27/25, 10:23 AM
I love this series so much! It deserves another chapter!
12/26/25, 12:37 PM
Continue please...

12/26/25, 10:38 PM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) We will! :)
12/26/25, 2:51 AM
I really(!) hope there’s another chapter here. This story has been so hot and yet heart wrenching. It’s interesting the System brought Five to Souta intentionally, but surely that means the System has a plan for how to reunite the two?

12/26/25, 10:38 PM
@[rodjock](/user/show/227582) Further chapters are already in the making/ready for release! :)
12/26/25, 8:21 PM
Really great story and hot as hell. I’m really loving this one. Great job
12/26/25, 7:21 PM
I don't read Spanish, but deepL translator works great. Hot story. I'm looking forward to seeing what Principal Brown has planned for the big hunky coach? :muscle:
12/26/25, 4:35 PM
This story is so hot and so well-written. Love the worldbuilding and MC’s POV, too. Top’s POV, horny muscle bottom daddies - push all my buttons why don’t ya, lol And then you add in different types of powers, too. Can’t wait to see where your dirty, creative mind takes things!
12/25/25, 2:36 PM
Amazing story, amazing writing. Took me a while to discover this, but oh my, have I been missing out! Very unique and extremely hot!

12/26/25, 1:58 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) So glad you liked it! Xxx