Recent Comments

4/5/21, 1:46 PM
Thank you for your comment. Yes, there's been a lot of plot to cover, but now that it's all explained, and the Pharaoh has returned more powerful than ever, we are back to the fun of the slow breaking of the will. Thank you for your suggestions too.
4/5/21, 1:38 PM
I'd stopped reading this series, just because the plot got a little too convoluted for me. But the description for this chapter caught my attention, and I'm glad I read it, because I was turned on by the President's relatively slow conversion and the way he was seduced by the promise to "Make Egypt Great Again" (so to speak). I hope that in subsequent chapters we get more detailed imagery of the men taking off their normal street clothes to don the Egyptian loincloths, because I think that's a really hot detail.
3/31/21, 4:33 PM
My kinda story, Dude, even though I'm not into feet. Helped my wank.
Martin
3/21/21, 1:49 PM
Lovely break of the 4th wall! So rare and this one is really good!

3/31/21, 4:00 AM
@Martin Glad you enjoyed this (and thanks for the ability to hide my name and reply). I originally came up with this idea three years ago as a response to certain stories and tropes they use. This contest was just the motivation i needed and i wrote it in about three days right before the deadline, so thanks for that as well. It was originally going to focus more on Spider-Man himself, but Deadpool has a way of taking over. When he did it was natural to have 4th wall breaks, and I'm happy they worked for you. Honestly they (and the font styling) were the things i was most worried about, so hearing you compliment that puts my heart at ease.
Toughluck
3/31/21, 3:04 AM
I'll take much more of this any day!
3/26/21, 5:38 PM
Jon deserves to be punished for this transgression. Maybe be Theo's servant for a week and call him sir when they are alone in the room.
Anonymous
3/24/21, 4:51 PM
its from his tumblr "slutty naughty jock". he has been reposting the stories from there.
3/24/21, 3:47 PM
The typos were a little distracting, and some of the descriptors used felt a little lazy and awkward, but the story was really fun and compelling nonetheless. I definitely came hard. I can't wait to read more, and hit me up if you need an editor, okay?
3/24/21, 1:31 PM
This is ADORABLE! You describe Jon so perfectly--God, he sounds like an ideal guy--and his sweet, genuine, wonderful personality makes him even better. The fact that he's been tricked into giving oral sex for so long is kind of hilarious (although it's sad that people have been taking advantage of his naivete for so long...). I hope that Theo can teach Jon a few "facts of life" and make him more worldly, without Jon losing his pure heart. :D
3/24/21, 12:06 PM
Hilarious