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Anonymous
4/9/21, 12:52 AM
oh im so excited! it's a classic setup, but i can clearly see your own voice/special spin on it so none of it feels stale. plus all the character voices are really distinctive and fun, and in addition to being really hot the moments of comedy definitely had me giggling. this is exactly up my street, and i'll be waiting with baited breath for more!!!
4/9/21, 12:05 AM
This was fantastic! Loving this
4/8/21, 8:46 PM
Really fun story, and well done! Super interested to see where you take it next.
4/8/21, 4:00 PM
Heres to another 99 chapters! ;)
4/7/21, 11:34 PM
Fun, but I felt bad for Jake at the end.

4/8/21, 12:21 AM
Trust me, Jake is very much a long term part of this story! @Derek Williams

4/8/21, 2:50 AM
@Freckleman64 Awesome! Looking forward to reading more :)
4/8/21, 1:38 AM
Awesome first chapter! I'm happy to hear that Jake will remain part of this story.
4/6/21, 7:13 AM
more chapters like this so hot!
4/5/21, 1:46 PM
Thank you for your comment. Yes, there's been a lot of plot to cover, but now that it's all explained, and the Pharaoh has returned more powerful than ever, we are back to the fun of the slow breaking of the will. Thank you for your suggestions too.
4/5/21, 1:38 PM
I'd stopped reading this series, just because the plot got a little too convoluted for me. But the description for this chapter caught my attention, and I'm glad I read it, because I was turned on by the President's relatively slow conversion and the way he was seduced by the promise to "Make Egypt Great Again" (so to speak). I hope that in subsequent chapters we get more detailed imagery of the men taking off their normal street clothes to don the Egyptian loincloths, because I think that's a really hot detail.
3/31/21, 4:33 PM
My kinda story, Dude, even though I'm not into feet. Helped my wank.