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4/16/21, 10:09 PM
This was fantastic, well done. Great pacing, good character work, and a hot scene. looking forward to more!
Anonymous
4/16/21, 12:35 PM
I agree that this doesn't seem to attack Republicans. If anything, it's just an overused and unoriginal stereotype of one of the American political parties.
4/16/21, 3:15 AM
Fuck, this is hot. I hoped that the trio of friends would come up again after their introduction in the first chapter and I'm excited to see our accursed bottom's development! Great job, and looking forward to more!
4/15/21, 9:05 AM
Like the other commenter said, an instant classic. Each chapter has been insanely hot & you've done a great job at balancing mind-bendingly erotic sex with plenty of personality in the writing style to make it feel unique and memorable. I know you've gotten feedback for changes in the comments, but honestly I'd say stick to your guns & stay true to your initial vision, what you've done so far has been fantastic & I can't wait to see how it pans out. My only sadness is it will be 10 chapters not 100!
KKA
4/14/21, 8:44 PM
feels like an instant classic, loving your development of these characters. looking forward to more, this curse will be a marathon for Willem AND you!
Anonymous
4/13/21, 8:26 PM
More please more
4/13/21, 4:34 PM
Oh yes, of corse this story brings me so much fun, but the end has break my heard into painful peaces, which i will never found again.
jimbor
4/13/21, 5:37 AM
Awesome story. I would love to see Willem forced to give up expensive preppy straight guy clothes and shoes - and maybe get a suitable haircut! -
Jay
4/13/21, 3:13 AM
Really enjoying this story, it is fantastic. So often erotic stories sacrifice character development for sex scenes but you have masterfully combined both. I'm definitely on board for more of Willem's trials and tribulations. I did think this chapter missed a trick by not having the cop shove that nightstick inside Willem while he was fucking him - I love DP scenes and the one with Josh and the twins was over all too soon for my liking! I don't know if you'd consider a spot of fisting - I can envision a scene where Josh and/or the twins inflict that on Willem. And I would really like to see Willem publicly humiliated - wearing skimpy clothing, coerced into nude modeling or porn if he wants to get the dick that he wants. Desperation for dick could easily be the lever for guys to push him into stuff like that, especially if they know he's homophobic and a bully.
4/12/21, 10:09 PM
Definitely love how the story is going. I will say I think Willem's character development might be rushed just a tad. We're at 94 more tops and he is already kind is okay with being a bottom. It seems like to me he should have much more inner turmoil trying to reconcile how pleasurable he finds the sex, with how he sees himself and where he wants to be after meeting the requirements of the curse. That, plus his budding relationship with Jake, will make it much more believable that he's worked through these issues if your plan is to make him stay gay. I do like how you are showing that he cannot simply return to the status quo and how maybe he social becomes kind of trapped being gay, so even if he wanted to go back, it's more complicated. I also think that the curse should come with some more unexpected conditions and loopholes. For example, it could be a hot ending where he never bottoms for 100 different guys because he falls in love with Jake and accepts that he will never go back to the way he was, but is not punished by the curse. Or have Jake start to be affected by the curse if he and Willem keep fucking. Like Jake becomes super dominant and masculine, while Willem does the opposite. Anyway, I think this story is incredible and you have a real knack for writing. If I was going to have the story go anywhere, Willem likely needs to start dressing and looking (maybe sounding) more gay. If he is a surfer, make his new suit of choice a speedo. Maybe he is forced to shave his body. Maybe he hooks up with a UCLA frat bro and goes into college with everyone thinking he's gay (again he gets trapped in the socialization that he's gay). So many hot options! Keep them coming!

4/13/21, 1:12 AM
@randomcreativename I definitely have plans for the next chapter for some fun changes to Willem's clothes! Boxers can only cut it for so long. I've also got plans for more of Willem's pushback to the changes going on in his mind and body, because although he's learning the joys of gay sex, that nasty little poison pill of heterosexuality within him is going to prove tough to stamp out. Also, although he has to fuck 100 guys, ultimately I have plotted this story out to be a 10-chapter series. So we are about halfway through now.