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5/7/21, 11:32 PM
Major kudos to the beta readers that helped edit and polish this into its final form!
5/7/21, 2:46 PM
Very nicely done! I especially appreciated the whimsy of your line, "after a raid using their wits and athleticism, as well as some well-placed bribes, a grappling hook, and a reliably rowdy camel. To say nothing of the sex, which, hot :D

5/7/21, 5:36 PM
@Noam de Pluma. Thank you! I was trying to catch a little bit of that fun pulp feel before the intense stuff started. The camel ended up being more significant than originally planned, ha!
5/6/21, 11:47 AM
Crying. Absolutely CRYING. When I tell you my heart leaped when I saw this post...and it was worth it. The contrast between the two sex scenes was amazing: the final time between Willem and Jake made me understand why it's called *making love.* And the confession scene between the two...it hurts. Willem's actions admittedly raise my hackles a bit ("If you really loved me"--terrifying line, that), but overall this has been an amazing story that's left me unsure of what conclusion I want. Could Willem be happy being gay? Is it wrong for him to "turn gay" because of a curse? I am so eager to see what happens. Thank you for this gift. :)

5/6/21, 1:09 PM
@Feed Your Head my heart fluttered too. this is such a great story from the beginning. I never come to this site for the plot, but this one tugs at my heart a bit.

5/7/21, 12:18 AM
@Feed Your Head I feel like there's definitely something cathartic in Willem's admission that he doesn't want to be gay. I think especially for bottoms, there can be a lot of shame and self loathing involved because they do want some normal things in life, but their desires make those things harder. However, unlike most gay guys, Willem might actually get to make a choice. And if he doesn't it will be entirely relatable. We'll have to see.

5/7/21, 3:49 AM
@randomcreativename It's definitely a powerful moment, especially because it shows the truly strange dichotomy among our people. To have wild, unprotected anal sex with total strangers? That we accept. But to love someone of the same sex? To kiss them and romance them? No, THAT's gay. I can't understand that...I mean, I get it logically, but I don't UNDERSTAND it. Also, I'm curious as to what you mean by bottoms "wanting some normal things in life." Bottoming is totally normal! I don't like to conflate "typical" with "normal," if that makes sense...
5/7/21, 1:45 AM
Oh my stars, *Dace*, this ticks so many of my boxes I can't even. I love the unique characterization you gave to all the wolves, the aborted sex scene was blisteringly hot while it lasted, the emotional connection between Tim and Aed resonates... ugh, this is amazing work.
5/7/21, 1:21 AM
Ooh, I *like*. Not sure why it took so long for me to read this, but I'm sure as hell glad I got to it at last!
5/7/21, 12:48 AM
LOVE this story! I look forward to how you conclude it and hope for the best for Jake and Willem.
Max
5/7/21, 12:14 AM
I love stories that have some love between the protagonists; especially with the whole arc of Willem's self growth. I personally love happy endings, but please continue the great work with the finale.
5/6/21, 6:52 PM
Hot, heart-wrenching... amazing. Amazing work. Bring it all home next chapter! (Also: I expect some resolution to the B-plot of Willem's new wardrobe that's designed for a giant bubble butt. Don't think we've forgotten *that* bit of storyline :P )

5/6/21, 6:58 PM
@Noam de Pluma personally, I think Jake has the final say in the curse...fingers crossed, after all its because of him Willem got cursed to begin with
Scott
5/6/21, 2:41 PM
loving the story hope to read mire real soon. keep the seed spreading !
5/6/21, 10:02 AM
Truly a nice change of pace to have a romantically centred story. I love this one! Can't wait to read the finale.