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IvorySilk
7/13/21, 8:11 PM
Great start! Looking forwards to seeing more! I'm especially curious about how this memory altering technology will factor into the story. :3

7/18/21, 9:29 PM
@IvorySilk 💖
7/18/21, 3:21 AM
Excellent first chapter! I would love to read more.

7/18/21, 9:28 PM
@Hypnoguy67 thank you so much! I'm working on editing the second chapter and hope to post it in the upcoming week!
7/18/21, 10:40 AM
Great story, the only part I winced at was repeating the myth of Marsha throwing the first ANYTHING at Stonewall. She and Sylvia weren't even there the night that the police raided. They were extremely active in the Stonewall Rebellion in the following days, but they didn't catch word of what happened at Stonewall until the first night's events already ended. Stonewall charged a cover, so Marsha and Sylvia were at a drag bar several blocks away. Had this confirmed by a Stonewall vet who was INSIDE Stonewall when a drag king named Vinnie threw the first punch.

7/18/21, 1:23 PM
Thanks for the history tip. It prompted some deeper research -- I'm going to edit the story to make it more accurate. I found this excellent article on the complex oral history of Stonewall, and figured I should share it: https://www.them.us/story/who-threw-the-first-brick-at-stonewall

Anonymous
7/18/21, 6:44 PM
@bluesuedewho I'll also add that Sylvia's comment about the Molotov cocktails was most likely in jest: there were none of those thrown either, and probably no bricks either (the entire street at that time was cobblestone, and there were no construction sites nearby to grab bricks from).

7/18/21, 8:03 PM
@bluesuedewho That article you posted also has a couple of historical inaccuracies. Storme DeLarverie ALSO wasn't there on that first night. She was working as a bouncer in a lesbian bar in a different neighborhood, and couldn't get there until the following day. It was, according to Stonewall veteran Rusty Rose (confirmed to have been inside the Stonewall at the time), a drag king whom she only knew as "Vinnie" that threw the first punch inside the Stonewall Inn itself, which Rusty then followed up with her own right hook to a cop's jaw.

Nutiper
7/18/21, 8:51 PM
I feel like a savvy fix would just be to highlight (in the story) that it *is* a popular myth, rather than a historical detail. That would solve the problem of inadvertent misinformation (because the story will highlight that, oh, this is a common sentiment but isn't true), while also keeping the flow of the story as written, without disrupting too much. So Sam could have edited the sentence "It's a popular myth that Marsha P. Johnson threw the first dildo at Stonewall..." which still changes their reality, but in a way that acknowledges it's also a myth.
7/18/21, 5:11 PM
omgg I love it
7/18/21, 3:35 PM
Yes! Very awesome. Love the threesome idea. Also I'm happy that Reinhardt wants to bottom. I love dom top hypnotist so that was fun. This was super fun and sexy.
7/18/21, 1:48 PM
Oh god I'm so happy this story is continuing because I absolutely love it and I just can't wait to see whats in store for these characters, I really like how your induction sequences are long and detailed and I'm curious of how thats gonna go down with Balderich, I just absolutely love this.
7/14/21, 10:46 AM
This is brilliant work, and it's unusual that we see the straight-to-gay trope played on the mind controller as well as the people he controls! I do hope we get to see Robert put in his place though. That was, uh, really hot.
7/14/21, 6:05 AM
Ha, ha! Ahhhhh, so good. I love your dumb horny ape-men stories!
Kods
7/11/21, 11:58 PM
This is hot can't wait for more! Though I am curious how this will play out Jared and Matt seemingly had a deep connection even before Matt's powers came. but now they can express it intimately. I know you said it's going to be okay so I have hope! Though admittedly I'd still feel a bit sad if Matt's answer was "Yeah we can have sex and I'll dominate you...but I don't love you and never will."

7/12/21, 1:06 AM
@Kods Thanks a lot! Oh yeah, they're gonna have a happy ending but they're gonna have to earn it.
6/29/21, 12:38 PM
Super hot hookup! Excited to see where it goes. Mostly just feel bad for Jared, rejection's a bitch...

7/11/21, 8:25 PM
@tenser13 Thanks! don't worry, it's gonna be all right for him.