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7/18/21, 6:34 AM
I loved that arc on cyoc! Put in a chapter there too. Hope to see more like this as it's a fun premise.

7/19/21, 1:24 AM
Oh, sweet! I find CYOC is a great source for ideas even though lots of fun prompts fizzle out. @djinnie

7/20/21, 8:30 AM
@bluesuedewho Wait, your name sounded *extremely* familiar — I read and enjoyed this and a few of your other stories with no context, but I just went back to my old much-neglected cyoc account and saw you'd posted a bunch a few months ago in some threads I made, specifically the "a student meant to get a textbook and instead gets a book of reality one" ! That's wild, I love this story and I don't know if was those threads in particular which inspired it but either way, so glad you're writing more.

7/20/21, 10:12 AM
I hope it's cool that I used your idea as a springboard here (odds are pretty high we're talking about the same thread on CYOC)! I posted a few chapters there, but when nobody added anything to those threads for months I was inspired to try writing a whole story on GSS. I don't suppose you go by himitsuboy on CYOC? I haven't ever really written fiction before -- it was the madcap atmosphere of CYOC that helped me finally loosen up enough to get started. @cinaedus
7/20/21, 6:13 AM
Great work, hope we get a second chapter!

7/20/21, 9:55 AM
Thanks! Next chapter coming soon! @Growing Geek
7/19/21, 7:45 PM
Finally a new series I can look forward to! I can see someone stealing the book, crossing out 'Sam is straight and nothing can turn him' and writing in 'Sam is gay and nothing can turn him straight'

7/20/21, 9:54 AM
Thanks! Gabe and Sam are both trying to be as careful as possible, but they're definitely going to run into some trouble soon. @DuskSkullKing
7/19/21, 12:46 PM
I'll enjoy reading more chapters for sure!

7/20/21, 9:53 AM
Thanks! The next chapter should be up in a couple of days. @JockPupTraxxx
7/20/21, 5:42 AM
very creative! would love to see what more items do
7/19/21, 12:26 PM
where is the rest of this story? I've read this before and i know it went farther then them getting on the bus!

7/19/21, 11:18 PM
@Kerwin I've started rewriting it into the multi chapter story it should have been in the first place. The original upload had a lot cut out (the first lines are actually the beginning of Chapter 3) and was horribly compressed (the first chapter is already longer than the original upload) to try and fit inside the guidelines of the challenge. The current status of the rewrite is Chapter 1: Complete and posted Chapter 2: Partially done (there are a few scenes that aren't cooperating) Chapter 3: Just needs 2 posted and a little polishing Then there is a mass of outline and a few scattered scenes roughly where they belong The last three chapters of the story are in basically the same state as 3 I haven't had a lot of time for writing this year and my muse has been focused on later parts of the story when I've had time to work on it so progress has been slow, but I am going to get this story posted if it kills me. It just might take a while.
7/19/21, 10:39 PM
I'm a simple man, I see big sub small top in a hypno gay story, I'm in. Also, feet, thanks for that, the more the merrier <3
7/18/21, 3:20 PM
The reality change stuff here is great. I hope things stay positive and fun. I do like the college is free element, nice touch. Also him getting a new phone as a sign of more saved money is great. Them remembering the old is good too. In fact I would totally add something like "[name] always remembers what things like were before a change even as he fully knows how things are now." But yeah, lots of fun here. PS. Hope some rimming occurs. :)

7/19/21, 1:28 AM
Thanks! Glad my little setting changes came through. I'm planning on working in your suggestion to the main characters' list of "safety clauses." No promises on when, but there will definitely be rimming at some point. @Heru Kane

7/19/21, 4:07 PM
@bluesuedewho awesome stuff. Looling forward to that. Oh, by the way, I could see him writimg something like "STDs were wiped out by science" and "Male butts are strenchy and can easily and safely take even the biggest cocks" and maybe even "male butts have a natural lube to make them clean". Hehe Lots of fun could be had here. Like I know I would give straight guy bubble butts and make it so gay guys naturally have bigger cocks. Hehe Anyway. Whether you like or use my ideas or npt, minus the rimming, yay on that, this is a good story!

7/19/21, 7:29 PM
We must be thinking alike! About half these things are already in my draft for chapter 2! @Heru Kane
7/19/21, 7:22 AM
big sub and you'll get a fan for life
7/18/21, 8:36 PM
I have an idea, make the coach a big submissive bottom and in a relationship with one of the teacher of the arts department (like the theater one)

7/19/21, 1:32 AM
I don't currently have plans for any coach characters, but I'll keep it in mind! @darkblade2814

7/19/21, 5:36 AM
@bluesuedewho I see, I hope the idea helps