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7/21/21, 2:40 AM
Very hot chapter two. I loved the dick growth, and playing with stereotypes, and self-love time Sam takes. The tone of the story, with how the two friends interact, is great and the rules they set out will make things interesting. I also loved the man in the black suit outside their dorm, hinting at something else afoot. Oh, Marc being a constant thing too is nice and adds even more spice.

7/21/21, 4:29 AM
Thanks! There's definitely things happening beyond the main characters' understanding here. @MonsterMash62
7/21/21, 2:52 AM
So part of chapter 2 overwrote chapter 1 starting with "After permanently securing..."

7/21/21, 4:26 AM
Oh, thanks for the heads up! I tried to edit chapter 1 but it looks like an old version posted instead. @djinnie
7/21/21, 3:57 AM
Such incredible world-building and an intriguing story! I look forward to more chapters.

7/21/21, 3:59 AM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much for your encouraging words! We're already editing the next few, so more is definitely coming!
IvorySilk
7/20/21, 11:34 PM
Hehe, it's starting! Looking forward to more! ^^

7/20/21, 11:42 PM
@IvorySilk thanks for reading it and encouraging me to keep at it! <3
7/18/21, 6:34 AM
I loved that arc on cyoc! Put in a chapter there too. Hope to see more like this as it's a fun premise.

7/19/21, 1:24 AM
Oh, sweet! I find CYOC is a great source for ideas even though lots of fun prompts fizzle out. @djinnie

7/20/21, 8:30 AM
@bluesuedewho Wait, your name sounded *extremely* familiar — I read and enjoyed this and a few of your other stories with no context, but I just went back to my old much-neglected cyoc account and saw you'd posted a bunch a few months ago in some threads I made, specifically the "a student meant to get a textbook and instead gets a book of reality one" ! That's wild, I love this story and I don't know if was those threads in particular which inspired it but either way, so glad you're writing more.

7/20/21, 10:12 AM
I hope it's cool that I used your idea as a springboard here (odds are pretty high we're talking about the same thread on CYOC)! I posted a few chapters there, but when nobody added anything to those threads for months I was inspired to try writing a whole story on GSS. I don't suppose you go by himitsuboy on CYOC? I haven't ever really written fiction before -- it was the madcap atmosphere of CYOC that helped me finally loosen up enough to get started. @cinaedus
7/20/21, 6:13 AM
Great work, hope we get a second chapter!

7/20/21, 9:55 AM
Thanks! Next chapter coming soon! @Growing Geek
7/19/21, 7:45 PM
Finally a new series I can look forward to! I can see someone stealing the book, crossing out 'Sam is straight and nothing can turn him' and writing in 'Sam is gay and nothing can turn him straight'

7/20/21, 9:54 AM
Thanks! Gabe and Sam are both trying to be as careful as possible, but they're definitely going to run into some trouble soon. @DuskSkullKing
7/19/21, 12:46 PM
I'll enjoy reading more chapters for sure!

7/20/21, 9:53 AM
Thanks! The next chapter should be up in a couple of days. @JockPupTraxxx
7/20/21, 5:42 AM
very creative! would love to see what more items do
7/19/21, 12:26 PM
where is the rest of this story? I've read this before and i know it went farther then them getting on the bus!

7/19/21, 11:18 PM
@Kerwin I've started rewriting it into the multi chapter story it should have been in the first place. The original upload had a lot cut out (the first lines are actually the beginning of Chapter 3) and was horribly compressed (the first chapter is already longer than the original upload) to try and fit inside the guidelines of the challenge. The current status of the rewrite is Chapter 1: Complete and posted Chapter 2: Partially done (there are a few scenes that aren't cooperating) Chapter 3: Just needs 2 posted and a little polishing Then there is a mass of outline and a few scattered scenes roughly where they belong The last three chapters of the story are in basically the same state as 3 I haven't had a lot of time for writing this year and my muse has been focused on later parts of the story when I've had time to work on it so progress has been slow, but I am going to get this story posted if it kills me. It just might take a while.