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7/21/21, 3:30 AM
Oh, two random things. 1. Am I correct in thinking that they can undo something they wrote. That when they cross it out it goes back to what it was before their change. 2. They wrote that Marc has a 'magic dick' which kind of makes the assumption that 'magic' exists. Which leads me to one of them thinking about gaining magical abilities. hehe As an aside, is the story always going to be from Sam's pov? Its not bad, its actually a very interesting element to it. But it could be cool if there is something Gabe does that is super cool, like awesome fun gay sex, we might see it happen from him.

7/21/21, 4:32 AM
Yes to #1 and #2! I was planning on Sam being the narrator the entire time, but I won't rule out the possibility of a bonus chapter from Gabe's perspective, or maybe something in a chapter that lets the reader know what Gabe thinks about all the stuff happening. @Heru Kane
7/21/21, 2:40 AM
Very hot chapter two. I loved the dick growth, and playing with stereotypes, and self-love time Sam takes. The tone of the story, with how the two friends interact, is great and the rules they set out will make things interesting. I also loved the man in the black suit outside their dorm, hinting at something else afoot. Oh, Marc being a constant thing too is nice and adds even more spice.

7/21/21, 4:29 AM
Thanks! There's definitely things happening beyond the main characters' understanding here. @MonsterMash62
7/21/21, 2:52 AM
So part of chapter 2 overwrote chapter 1 starting with "After permanently securing..."

7/21/21, 4:26 AM
Oh, thanks for the heads up! I tried to edit chapter 1 but it looks like an old version posted instead. @djinnie
7/21/21, 3:57 AM
Such incredible world-building and an intriguing story! I look forward to more chapters.

7/21/21, 3:59 AM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much for your encouraging words! We're already editing the next few, so more is definitely coming!
IvorySilk
7/20/21, 11:34 PM
Hehe, it's starting! Looking forward to more! ^^

7/20/21, 11:42 PM
@IvorySilk thanks for reading it and encouraging me to keep at it! <3
7/18/21, 6:34 AM
I loved that arc on cyoc! Put in a chapter there too. Hope to see more like this as it's a fun premise.

7/19/21, 1:24 AM
Oh, sweet! I find CYOC is a great source for ideas even though lots of fun prompts fizzle out. @djinnie

7/20/21, 8:30 AM
@bluesuedewho Wait, your name sounded *extremely* familiar — I read and enjoyed this and a few of your other stories with no context, but I just went back to my old much-neglected cyoc account and saw you'd posted a bunch a few months ago in some threads I made, specifically the "a student meant to get a textbook and instead gets a book of reality one" ! That's wild, I love this story and I don't know if was those threads in particular which inspired it but either way, so glad you're writing more.

7/20/21, 10:12 AM
I hope it's cool that I used your idea as a springboard here (odds are pretty high we're talking about the same thread on CYOC)! I posted a few chapters there, but when nobody added anything to those threads for months I was inspired to try writing a whole story on GSS. I don't suppose you go by himitsuboy on CYOC? I haven't ever really written fiction before -- it was the madcap atmosphere of CYOC that helped me finally loosen up enough to get started. @cinaedus
7/20/21, 6:13 AM
Great work, hope we get a second chapter!

7/20/21, 9:55 AM
Thanks! Next chapter coming soon! @Growing Geek
7/19/21, 7:45 PM
Finally a new series I can look forward to! I can see someone stealing the book, crossing out 'Sam is straight and nothing can turn him' and writing in 'Sam is gay and nothing can turn him straight'

7/20/21, 9:54 AM
Thanks! Gabe and Sam are both trying to be as careful as possible, but they're definitely going to run into some trouble soon. @DuskSkullKing
7/19/21, 12:46 PM
I'll enjoy reading more chapters for sure!

7/20/21, 9:53 AM
Thanks! The next chapter should be up in a couple of days. @JockPupTraxxx
7/20/21, 5:42 AM
very creative! would love to see what more items do