Recent Comments

7/25/21, 12:24 PM
Wow. I am just loving this. Sam thinking about Gabe’s dick and everything he’s doing to make it normal is super hot. Sam in the shower is super hot. Sam being happy about the changes to his butt and exploring them is super hot. The way Sam and Gabe interact is still pitch perfect, with the whole friend, bro thing being a part of their interactions, even if there’s hints that it could move into bros who have sex. Really well done. I’m blown away by how good you’ve written these characters, while still keeping this story hot and sexy.

7/25/21, 1:28 PM
Thanks! Character dynamics are just as important to me as sex scenes in stories like these. @MonsterMash62
SC Walker
7/24/21, 11:27 PM
This story checks ALL my boxes, and I like that there are subtle shifts of character development. Honestly I'm jealous at how creative and well written this is. If you ever want to chat/exchange ideas I would be happy to help. Like seriously it was already hot but then you added butt growth and auto-lubrication. This actually might be my favorite thing on here. EDIT: Of course Nupiter helped you write this. He wrote my OTHER favorite story on here. Props to you both.

7/25/21, 12:00 AM
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! You're free to share any ideas you have, although I'll admit I already probably have more ideas than I can realistically work into one story! @SC Walker

SC Walker
7/25/21, 12:21 AM
@bluesuedewho Haha I feel the same way. I have tons of ideas but not enough time to write them all. Is it cool if I email you?

7/25/21, 12:31 AM
The forum PM system would be better, if it's all the same to you. @SC Walker
7/24/21, 11:52 PM
This is seriously enjoyable. Steamy, clever, and very, very hot - thanks for writing! My favourite part so far is Marc's crush on Sam. I have a feeling we're going to end up seeing them go at it, just a straight guy lending his ass out to help a buddy. I'm curious if Sam is going to try and scratch out any of their edits, like the water thing, or maybe even the edit that says Sam's straight. Gabe can't do it, according to the rules, but Sam might be able to.

7/25/21, 12:04 AM
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! I didn't originally intend for Marc to be a big part of the story, but it ended up being hard to resist the lure of a magic dick. I *will* say that Sam will still be straight by the end of the story, even if that definition looks a little different in the reality the MC's end up creating. @Derek Williams
7/23/21, 6:27 PM
Firstly, seriously, love this story. So very cool. Sam going over the book and seeing older changes is brilliant. I was honestly thinking about that so it was cool that it was added. I think a fun little element could be the two going over it and together changing or fixing any of those elements that they see as not super fun. (Another option is they could add a line at the start of the book that things that were crossed out dissapear, in order to clean up the book, that could be interesting.) The self-lubricating sexy bubble butts is super hot. How it appeared is also super cool. I do kind of wish we got to see Kevin getting fucked into mindless bliss, but obviously with Sam as the pov character it didn't happen. Speaking of that, I am not super a fan of the whole us not knowing what Gabe wrote. Like I get why you did that but I liked seeing things get written at the time and so us not seeing that feels like an editing let down. Its the one thing so far that I was a little less than super happy about. That said this was a super hot chapter. This is an amazing story and I look forward to reading more of it. Also, I feel jealous towards Nutiper and MonsterMash62 for them helping contribute. hehe Seriously though, super sexy story. Really love the antics going on. I also like the slow and steady change of what it means to be straight and stuff. Oh, and the whole thing of him remembering how he did not have the bubble butt before while also remembering he did was a nice description.

7/24/21, 3:11 PM
Glad you're enjoying it so far! @Heru Kane
7/24/21, 7:14 AM
This series just gets better and better. The Sam's obliviousness to the change was really hot and made the pay off when he realised what was up with his bubble butt even better. I also love the fact we don't get to see what Gabe wrote. Since the story's written from Sam's perspective the idea of him being taught a lesson but not knowing what's going to happen is super hot. I'm looking forward to finding out if he can figure out what's changed!
7/24/21, 12:21 AM
This story is truly exciting so far, very fresh takes, and a bit of a slow burn, but still extremely sexy. I hope that when Sam is truly remade into some kind of hypersexualized iteration of himself, that you spend a few chapters with some extended sex scenes and antics. The slow build up is very sexy, but the narrative focus with Sam keeps us from getting exciting scenes like Kevin getting pounded out by Gabe. Once that flips I'm hoping you can add more sexual content to compliment the excellent writing and concept.

7/24/21, 12:32 AM
Thanks! There are enough small changes that have built up to a critical mass at this point. Expect more action in future chapters! @brium
7/23/21, 11:53 PM
also, if you're taking requests, would love to see some exploration of straight men have big sensitive nipples and pecs. Tease. ;)

7/24/21, 12:17 AM
Glad you like the story! I'm not taking requests as such, but obviously people are free to share ideas! I have some nipple play in one of my other stories, [Pan-Galactic Human Fan Club] @gotacoolname
7/23/21, 11:21 PM
absolutely amazing. Most exciting story on this site in a long time! The editing of this straight guy is brilliant.
Anonymous
7/23/21, 8:21 PM
Everything about this chapter is unbelievably hot. Very excited to see what the most recent changes are. Keep up the great work!