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Vespair
7/27/21, 8:47 PM
that was as coherent and filled with turns as an oscar winning movie. love how flawed even Bussy is, with the implication that this smaller character just keeps screwing herself over because of her own hubris to curse people who annoy her for the sake of making the world better. the best stories are the ones that somehow manage to create intricate twists and turns out of the interactions of a set of flawed, self-interested characters--none of whom are completely good or completely antagonistic. the implications are there, like what did jeffrey do to earn a punishment ten times willem's? and even though it is a hundred for willem, the story didnt read like a laundry list of okay we're done with #76 now lets talk about #77. every chapter showed something different enough where there is not any chapter that shone less than the others. there was something just cinematic about this series

7/28/21, 1:12 AM
@Vespair Thank you so much! I really appreciate all of the kind words. I definitely wanted Bussy to be just a complete mess of a person lol. I thought that would be a lot more interesting than the super mysterious omniscient witch that always seems to appear in these types of stories. Thank you again!
7/27/21, 6:25 AM
hotttt. hope more is to come. keep it up.

7/27/21, 2:45 PM
@Jonanator Thank you! There's definitely more to come! Love hearing that you're enjoying it!

7/27/21, 10:34 PM
@time.to.occur yeah, it is an amazing story. the way it's going so far. Keep it up.
7/27/21, 3:32 AM
So the many scenes of this chapter were pretty amazing. I did not super enjoy the very end (how did the system not recognize swallowing as part of a blow job, lol) but beyond that the chapter was super sexy. I mean gay guys not blowing each other does take some fun out of gay relationships but whatever, lol. As a note, we never got to read the change made at the end of last night, not words wise. That is kind of surprising as I figured we would at least get to see what he wrote at some point. Fun stuff though it seems to have taken a life of its own, to the point I don't think either would recognize themselves anymore.

7/27/21, 8:56 PM
Thanks! The end is supposed to set up more fun for the next chapter since it gives Gabe ideas. Sam will read Gabe's last change at some point, he just had bigger priorities this chapter. @Heru Kane
Anonymous
7/27/21, 3:31 AM
Another amazing chapter! I absolutely love Sam's slow spiral of unwittingly turning himself into a slutty bottom.

7/27/21, 8:53 PM
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7/27/21, 4:59 AM
This story is so fucking hot! It's like every straight boy fantasy all rolled into one. I love that you're keeping him straight and redefining what it means to be straight (what's a bro job between friends?) I cannot wait to see what you come up with next. I just know the eventual scene with him and Mark is gonna be off the charts hot. 5 stars and endless accolades from me to you (and @Nutiper and @MonsterMash62)!

7/27/21, 8:53 PM
Oh, thanks! Pushing the boundaries of "straight" and poking fun at fragile heterosexual egos is definitely a big part of the story. @Freckleman64
7/27/21, 7:36 AM
This has been such a hot story. I keep going back to it. I like the power dynamic between Sam and Gabe, and how their friendship has shifted between the edits. It really makes for an engaging plot. Sam is infuriating, though, and I love it. If he made smarter edits, I'm not certain this would be as entertaining. I'm really hoping to see Sam get huge as well... Though if Sam is the straightest guy on campus... I suppose if the rest of the guys are gay, it won't take much to shift him over as well.

7/27/21, 8:52 PM
Thanks! Wishes gone wrong because of poor wording is one of my favorite tropes, so I'm having fun writing changes that have unexpected (but fun) consequences. @RedPed
7/27/21, 12:06 PM
I have loved every single syllable of this story. I cannot wait to read more about Sam's slow transformation into a paragon of heterosexuality. At this rate, Sam might wind up the only straight guy left on campus!

7/27/21, 8:50 PM
Thanks! He's definitely going to be in demand as one of the few people on campus still willing to give blowjobs. @Demivierge
7/27/21, 6:32 PM
It's an interesting series. Sam seems guaranteed to come out the loser in one respect. he keeps getting in very sexy situations but he can't really enjoy them because he's straight. They wrote in the book that Sam can't be turned gay, I think, so unless that entry was in pencil Sam is doomed to be constantly horny but refusing full on gay sex. I don't like the negative tone in Gabe's behavior either. I hope they can be a happy couple by the end and both versatile to be fair. I can't see Sam and Marc as a couple. Sam and Gabe would be an awesome pair assuming they were equals. I do wish gay guys could still do bjs though.

7/27/21, 8:49 PM
Thanks for reading! A big part of the story is Sam making changes to the definition of "straight" so he can still do all the fun sex stuff guys he wants without it seeming "gay" (which, obviously it is, but not in the reality that Sam and Gabe are in). @Cutlerfan
7/27/21, 4:40 PM
I'll consider making some edits since the locker room scene seems to be getting misread. It's supposed to read as two horny dudes (who have been checking each other out all morning) both using the book to make it okay to fool around -- Gabe sees Sam ogling him, so he makes public sex normal, then Sam uses the book to make straight guys giving blowjobs normal. Like MonsterMash62 said, they're both just kind of dumbasses when it comes to making changes. Gabe isn't malicious, he's just horny and picking up on clues that there's a mutual interest in experimenting.

SC Walker
7/27/21, 5:24 PM
@bluesuedewho Right, that's what I figured was your intention. But maybe since Gabe frames it as "you owe me" and then how rude/dismissive he is after he cums, it feels more coercive. I'm glad though that gabe is still intended to be a nice guy.

7/27/21, 5:59 PM
@SC Walker I read it as how straight bros interact. Gabe framing it that way totally fits with his bro persona, especially after it’s even more dominant. He’s sort of joking, sort of not. And he pushes on Sam a little, but he’s still a little playful with it.
SC Walker
7/27/21, 3:29 PM
The sex parts of this story are some of the best I've ever read. It ticks all my boxes for sure - especially the lubed up holes. Though, I gotta agree with the other commentator about Gabe's recent developments. I like it when smaller guys top bigger guys, but that's a personal preference. But, I also felt like it was very important to the story Gabe and Sam's bond of friendship had mutual respect. For example, I liked seeing Gabe be a wingman for Sam. It was nice to illustrate their supportive friendship in that way. Gabe seems to be falling into that trap of thinking "dominant" is the same thing as "being a jerk". I understand that may be the intention, but I can't help but feel like it wasn't. After all, you still want your readers to root for Gabe... It would be different if it was framed like Gabe nudging Sam to experiment more as a means of helping him, freeing him from discomfort. I liked how apologetic Gabe was last chapter when Sam was inadvertantly affected by his impulsive edit. Yet this chapter he doesn't continue any of that care or concern. I'm not trying to dictate your story to you or make demands, I just think maybe your intentions didn't come through and maybe the text could be misinterpreted. As a writer, sometimes people misunderstand my stories as well - and I try to clarify and fix it to reduce confusion. Anyways overall a fantastic, hot story!